Okay, first of all, sorry if the comment looks confusing, but I'm using google translator. So my comment will probably have some errors.
Sorry, I wanted my English level to be advanced, but I'm still in the basics. I'm Brazilian, by the way, so you have a foreign reader hahahahah. I spent several days looking for a fanfic about Shin-ah (because he is one of the favorite characters), I found a very low number of fanfics written in my language, so I decided to venture into translating fanfics into English. And by a miracle of the universe, the Google translator translated his story well, with small errors that did not prevent my understanding.
You don't know how happy I am to find your fanfic so beautifully written.
It seems like it took forever to find a good and complete fanfic of my beautiful Blue Dragon and here I am with a melted heart.
I almost died reading your story, I wasn't sure how to imagine a good love story for Shin-ah, but you exceeded any expectations of mine.
How can I say? I loved everything about the protagonist and Shin-ah being incredibly wonderful, I can just imagine him being like that in love with someone.
Look, I don't even know what to say, I suffered, screamed, and cried. How I needed to read something like that. Feel my heart melting with the sweet moments between the two, with the kindness and sweetness of Shin-ah. Okay, I'm probably even more in love with this man, with God what do I do?
Seriously thanks for writing this fanfic, I don't even have words to describe my happiness. I was so afraid that it was incomplete, lucky for me.
But I also feel sad that it's over, I wanted to read more and stay within this new reality that you created. How lucky you made bonus chapters.
Seriously, just, thanks, you made my day happier, I am immensely grateful. You are a great writer.

Awwww this was so good. I binged it and I have no regrets. Felt totally canon. Love your writing style

I have a bad feeling that the villagers may catch Ae-Sun and something terrible will happen...
She'd better be careful.

Anyway, I like the fact that you give us a story behind the fur and the whole literate thing. Like I said before, these little details just make it better.

I do have some criticisms though... I've been ignoring it for a while because this is quite an old story and I'm sure you must've grown a lot, but it's bugging me a bit: Shin-Ah rarely talks. It took him forever to open up to other in the manga, so I think him talking to Ae-Sun this much was a bit OOC. I don't mind it that much though, however the part where he actually held her hand - it's an adorable scene, but very, very OOC.

And his name. Oh come on. Ae-Sun's done all this so far, but I feel only Yona has the honour to name him. I know this is gonna be an AU, but I respect Yona enough to know that she, and only she deserves that honour. No OC, not even Ae-Sun - even though I like Ae-Sun has the right for that.
I think I'm feeling too strongly about that. Maybe it's because Yona naming him was such a beautiful moment that this feels like it was stolen from her.

I hope you don't take this in a wrong way - like I said, I'm liking this story so far and its very promising. I'll continue reading and reviewing this.

I've read this fanfics and so far, it seems quite good. I like the fact that unlike other Shin-Ah/OC fanfics, this has a bit more realism to it. I'm already liking Ae-Sun.

I have to comment on the first time she saw his eyes - that moment was so simple and yet so beautifully well written, it actually sent a shiver up my spine.

I also like how you mentioned that they were short on food at times; all these little details makes it more realistic, something the most fanfics authors miss out on. The masks too - somehow every fanfic authors forget about that - I mean, I've forgotten too but at least I'd do a bit of research before writing a fic.

And the time he rescued her from the earthquake - that whole scene was so adorable and Ae-Sun's scrambled thoughts were so enjoyable to read.

SO GOOD! :D

This is so right that I can’t even explain how right it is. It just has that inborn sense of “it should be canon.” 3 Love your writing style, and YotD needed more girls anyway so good job all around!

Hmmm, what's the phrase? Ah. IT'S SO FLUFFY I'M GONNA DIE!

BEST AKATSUKI NO YONA STORY I'VE EVER READ

TTHIS IS SO FREAKING ADORABLE IM YELLING

This story is a masterpiece. I really admire your spectacular writing abilities and marveled at the character development throughout the chapters. This inspires me to develop my own writing skills. Nice job!

Oooh headcanon: Ki-Gun is the guy who tried to trap Yona underground.

I love this fic, and I've actually read it more than once. I wish there were more fics like this that explore Shin-ah's origins and his village (especially when it has a happy ending). Do you mind if I share it on my tumblr? I'll tag you appropriately and everything.

What a gorgeous story.

This fic is soooo beautiful! and I think that their relationship is adorable~ ah so kilig!

This fic is soooo beautiful! and I think that their relationship is adorable~ ah so kilig!