I binged this. Excellent story. Can’t believe my luck in finding this. I hope you continue and cannot wait to see what more you have in store for this story!

Didn’t like her moments with Cedric...don’t ship them right now. This chapter ending has cast the sails For my Avery/George ship :D I cannot wait for your next chapter. I am excited to see where you take EVERYTHING. great story. This is a gem. Well executed. Happy to have read what has been posted thus far.

- a big fan!

Ugh. No! She should have reprimanded Cedric! Girl why did you stop?! :( she should have told him no to saving him a dance too lol George was super sweet this chapter. And me thinks Fred still has some feelings for our girl. I am curious to how pretty she is based on George’s comment to her :)

Great cheater title! I cannot believe Cedric asked Cho. Should I be surprised though he did such a dickish thing though? My poor Avery. But yay George for the win! Curious is a understatement to say that I am to see how Fred reacts. Dang author, you’re really
Pulling off this love square. bravo!

Love this story! But I am not digging her crush on Cedric anymore. I think she puts too much stock in him and doesn’t think more on how he treats her. She deserves someone who knows her character better. Also, I can’t tell if George likes her truly or what is Fred’s deal.
If anything I just wish she knew her worth and would stand up For herself more with the boys as she does with her ex best fiend :/

EXCUSE ME WHAT THE FKJSHIDWHFIHFP! Ok so i just read this entire fic all in one go in the past couple hours and i am obsessed. I hadn't read any harry potter fanfiction in ages but i recently had a movie marathon and came back and im so glad i did becuase it led me to this story. Admittedly i had to trawl through a bunch of trash to get here but im glad i found this gem. I love your writing and I love Avery, and i wont deny that love triangles (squares?) are my guilty pleasure. On the one hand i want to see happy healthy relationships, on the other hand the evil part of me relishes when everyone is distraught and confused and theres drama because of confused feelings and jealousy. I like that you made the twins similar and true to their character but still their own distinct people and not just like a two dimensional joke the say every single other word for each other. You've also made Cedric an absolute dreamboat so thanks. Avery is also quite likable, i enjoy her strong sense of morality mixed with her panchant for rule breaking, though sometimes I'm a little sad she seems a bit pathetic, like shes nobody when she doesnt have the attention of the twins or cedric, so Id love to see her come into her own a bit and grow in confidence and form maybe more of a life outside of her romantic interests? No hate of course I thinks shes awesome. I'm also enjoying the plot your making, i just get butterflies reading it. I'm curious as to what you'll keep the same and what you'll change. If Cedric dies i might just riot and also maybe weep for a billion years, but I'm excited to see where you take things. I know its been a few months since you've updated but since this story was started quite a while ago and you still updated this year i hope that means youre still working on it. Regardless, I've really enjoyed reading this and thank you for your writing!

This was an amazing read! Thank you so much for sharing!

It would be kinda cool if Avery took Cedric’s place in the last task!

Wow! We really are being spoiled. I’m happy that Cedric actually talked to cho and Avery so honestly. The bittersweet confirmation that Avery hadn’t been tong about the feelings between her and Cedric :’( but also does this mean Avery has newfound feelings for George! I’m very very excited to hear what happens next. Thank you as always for writing

The corsage! Oh I hope it doesn’t give her away immediately. I’m so curious about what’s going on with everyone’s motivations haha. Did Cedric want to ask Avery out? Did Fred know that George was going to take Avery? Has George been interested in avery all this time? And gosh! It seems like Avery’s Mum is basically warning her in code! You updated very quickly I was amazed to find another update. Thank you for your writing, I can’t wait to hear what will happen next

OMG You are a fast writter! Thank you for updating so soon!

You’ve spoiled us with the arrival of 2020! Gosh even though Avery and Cedric are on the mend he’s still going with cho... I wonder if the second task will reflect that? I’m so curious where you’re going with Avery/George since she’s already had a slight thing with Fred it really is strange, but I like that from the beginning the twins have been their own people to Avery and that it’s showed through your writing. As always, thank you for writing and I really am very excited for your next update :)

I'm so in love with this story!
The best thing is that I don't really know who she is going to end up with. I mean, the obvious answer is Cedric, but who knows! I really love the twins ;) This could even be a triad story xD
Thank you for updating. I love the way you write!

Please don't kill Cedric... He's the best character in my eyes.

The chapter was good

Poor baby! (Loved the chapter)