The outfit sounds retarded. She should buy some safety shorts like Sakura wore to go with the dress.

Other than that thanks for writing up to here, wish she wasn't boy crazy, it make the story interesting. Combat and helping naruto train all that would he super cool. Instead it's just romance, a bit disappointing but this is all you and you're the one putting effort in so do you it looks good.

Gains team is legitimately strong too, and Gai iant like Kakashi who just messed around and got rusty since he always trains.

Thanks frow writing. Her insane attitude puts me off, shes a bit like Sakura but Sadara was never that bad cannon.

You write a lot of useless unnecessary thoughts. I can see why the story didn't keep going, instead of having them start a normal relationship you went with this weird slightly obsessive mess. Meh

Lmao I'm gonna read it. I'm a little disappointed you stopped writing but I'll follow it in case you got for it some day.

What an interesting story! It would have been great to read more.

It's beautiful. The pace of the story and the attention to detail are perfect. Revitalizing the wave arc with Team Gai and fleshing out the differences between Kakashi and Gai as a sensei was a great idea, especially since Gai has had experience with his team for one year already. I do wonder what Sarada will think of the younger version of her parents and their unusual qualities. If this continues, it has the potential to be one of the best fanfics around. Excited about chapter 6! Loved it.

Wish this story was updated in the future but, from what it looks like, you probably abandoned it.

Finally a Sarada x Naruto fic that isn't Sarada being the younger mistress of Hokage Naruto or otherwise being essentially pedobait. Time-travel fiction is great. Unfortunately this fic and its profile have been dormant for nearly 3 years, quite sad since its such a good start.

one of the best I've read

Continua

If you need help with beta reader I found a free one if you want to complete your story let me know if you're interested I also have ideas to expand upon how you can make it much more feasible time travel like Back to the Future or Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure don't be afraid that use Concepts to use in stories and just Branch off of that and expand on what already exists that's what good fanfiction is it please For the Love of All Things decent no lemons it disrespects the characters when you do that you're I wish you luck on your future fanfiction endeavor if you want help just let me know I'll expand upon a ideas good luck

I have an idea to expand upon your story but I can't p.m. you so here's my theory it's not strong as Albert Einstein's E equals MC square but it might work for your story you can't have her changing certain parts of History need to happen a certain way for none of those are become the person he does and since he will no longer go on the Wave Mission she must teach him the lesson that a Haku would have taught him something else try not the Mary Sue the character like I said in order for them to become stronger in the fight in the fourth Shinobi War the things that Sasuke went through is necessary for him to come out of his own Shadows I just thought I'd help expand upon because I can't p.m. you or suggest an idea this is only place I could put up the idea to help you expand on your story don't forget if you want you can ask to use Naruto music listing at the top with scene most people can visualize music in their head I've actually going to use that one my concept ideas to

Why stop?

This was really good, I hope you update it soon