Reviews for Kindred Souls
catspats31 chapter 1 . 5/31/2019
The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of various songs like Elsa Kopf's "Days and Moons", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.
Gerbilfriend chapter 29 . 5/30/2019
Reds pikachu being able to knock someone down is awesome. I also loved how intagreated battleing was to this, because champions. It was just a lot of fun
kalmaegi chapter 29 . 5/30/2019
Ohhh! Nice, nice. Glad you reached a hundred and one reviews.
Love Hilbert's interactions with the other Avatars. Ahhh Red Gyarados my angry baby! I dunno why but Sudowoodo(how to spell?) and the Red Gyarados at the Lake of Rage are my favorites since you meet them on the way. Apart from Suicuine, who I have nostalgic childhood fondness from the time I watched that time travel Pokemon movie.

I also love Flying types so it's obvious Rayquaza and Reshiram are my favorite legendaries. They look majestic you know?

Thanks for the neat explanation in private on why Hilbert is such a magnet for old souls where honor and prestige is huge thing. Which reminds me even his girlfriend is pretty regal lmao. The North Queen.
Charlie Jojo chapter 29 . 5/30/2019
Deceased god hmm kinda throws mew two or mew out the window

Thought Pokémon Satan was terrible but apparently red fucking caught cuthulu.

Revive? Hmmmm could red have Arceaus?

Mysteries man freaking got their hooks in my mind
kalamegi chapter 24 . 5/28/2019
Here Hilbert was, agonizing and doing the equivalent of a brooding tragic Hero, and yet all he needed was a nice long talk with Reshiram to clear up misunderstandings about his role.

Reshiram is so huffy and polite, I kinda wonder how the simple pure soul that is Hilbert managed to always get stuffy pokemon obsessed with propriety and honor. Come-on, his starter evolved into a goddamn Samurai my man!
kalmaegi chapter 23 . 5/28/2019
*guffaws* Reshiram. Please. RIP Hilbert.
SebatadeS chapter 28 . 11/27/2018
Seeing Hilber and Dawn as a couple is super cute. I'm super happy this story got completed, but I'm also sad it's over. This epilogue was absolutely spectacular. I loved everything about, especially the additional notes. The scene with Hilbert talking to Caitlin on the phone was super entertaining as well. I look forward to whatever you will write in the future!
Gerbilfriend chapter 28 . 11/27/2018
You finished! This was an awesome story and I loved the notes at the end. Really I loved the whole thing. Caitlin nagging was a highlight as was Glaceon and Samarott
Liune chapter 28 . 11/26/2018
Congratulations for finishing this amazing story!
Thank you so much for your hard work these 3 Years~
While I would also love to see a Moon & Gladion Story, you wanting to complete all other ongoing stories first is great too!
I hope you will continue to write, since I really loved this story and the summary trivia at the end is really amusing~
twilightwrites chapter 27 . 11/17/2018
I have to say that I really loved how this ‘confession’ played out. It perfectly matched their characters, and it was pretty funny, to boot. I’m glad that Dawn and Hilbert can move on, and the lowkey banter between Hilbert and Reshiram was great. XD
SebatadeS chapter 27 . 10/7/2018
I loved awkward Hilbert and smug Dawn in this chapter. They have a good dynamic together.
Gerbilfriend chapter 27 . 10/7/2018
That whole scene was adorable. Dawn beingso blunt was fun but I also liked Hilbert asking Reshiram about his powers, it was really funny. Thanks for updating :D
SebatadeS chapter 26 . 9/8/2018
This was a really calm and relaxing chapter. I loved it.
twilightwrites chapter 25 . 8/19/2018
“Dawn rolled her eyes. "I could assume that much, from the way you're not bleeding from every hole in your body."

Hilbert laughed before he stopped, a little nervous. "You're joking, right?"

She shrugged slightly, giving him the physical equivalent of the 'meh' sound in response to his question.”

My fave part. XD

I like that they’re able to talk freely around each other, be themselves. I wonder what’s gonna happen now that Dawn’s mission is complete.
SebatadeS chapter 25 . 8/13/2018
It's nice to see them both opening up to each other. They seem like genuine friends now.
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