OK...I’m going to have to demand for you to continue this story! LOL. I remember it from the contest and wishing it to be continued. I keep wondering what kept him from coming to the coffee illness from someone at the church? Car accident? Nerves? What? What? WHAT? Please put me out of my misery.

this was a different start...if you're ever inspired I'd read more!

Came across your story and loved it. I really hope you continue this.

I really hope you'll continue this one day. Gotta know what happens! Surely he had a good reason or maybe he's arriving as she's leaving and he catches her before she goes.

Would love to see what happens next, at least the aftermath.

Wow! This was good. I used to have a friend who was perpetually late. It actually cost her a few friendships along the way. It's one of those annoying things that starts to feel disrespectful after a point. We used to give her a start time that was an entire hour earlier than the actual, and half the time she would still be late.

Just happened to find this on the Meet The Mate and hope you plan to continue it.

I hope you decide to continue this story! I loved it :)

I am greatly disappointed at where the one shot has ended but this has great potential for a full story. I hope you continue it.

would love to read more... the end was a bit, well, unsatisfactory for being part of the 'meet the mate' contest. Reminds me more of Alanis Morisette's "Ironic"... 'meeting the man of your dreams and then meeting his beautiful wife'

I am not a religious type of person but I liked this a lot. I know it has been a long while since you updated it but I hope you will update it shortly so I could read more. I do like it!

Will you continue this as an M story. Christians DO have sex and it's silly for all Christian based stories to leave that part out.

It could be a great story.

Your story is wonderful! I can't wait to see when you continue!

I hope you still plan to continue this story.

I am not particularly religious in any sense of the word, but I did really enjoy this and I look forward to more :D I also wouldn't have guessed that this was your first fanfiction, it was so well written and the plot was very good! Also, Happy Thanksgiving!