you need some commas in your wrighting

Way sudenly the novel have two mc

so is cynthia not human or is the oc not human?

This is a really awesome story and I hope you start updating it again soon.

It is awesome and your really good at writing these stories this is the first one I've read I might read the other and I bet they'll be great as well and please continue this story I really love it and I'm review writing this on a guest account but I have a actually account anyways this story is awesome and please continue it and I love all the characters and I understand it takes a long time to write it took me a long time to right a story so take your time and don't rush because we can wait.

Tyranitar or Garchomp absolutely, I think those would be incredible additions for sexual reasons and battle reasons, super excited to see what you’ve done (especially since the chapters are already out lol)

I know you probably already picked them, but I think an Anthro Tyranitar would be incredibly original, you don’t see a whole lot of big girls like that, especially in a fanfiction, so I think it’s be amazing

where did you go author-San!?

garchomp the poll is probably already over lol

why not have a bigger romantic scene?

Marcus should have a anthro zeraora a legendary electric type.

is this dropped? I hope not i like this story and the concept is really interesting

Not bad! I'll definitely be watching this story!

Please make a midnight lycanroc with the same breast size as emerald

Put female lycanroc with g-cup breasts