Awesome..I was soo hooked up to this story..:).I loved it:)..

This is easy one of the best Arrow stories out there. The characters are all well written and it's great how that final chapter portrays them all as a family

Awesome story

Great story!

Awesome!

I loved your story. Holy hell, it's SO good. Thank you so much for sharing! There are only very few so well written stories!

This is easily one of the best Oliver/Felicity stories I've read. The plot is original, but takes some of its cues from the best scenes in the show. The character's are believable, although I would've liked to have seen Roy more developed. All in all, great work. Loved it.

I've always seen Felicity and Laurel as best friends. I like that you included this conversation. While it can come off as sweet, Oliver's actions, in this chapter, are totally controlling Felicity - just like Cooper did. Just because she's smiling doesn't mean he's not making her decisions for her. The rest of the story hasn't been like that though. So far the story has been very entertaining. Thanks.

I love your story. Wonderfully woven. Please write more. Thanks for sharing it.

I'm so happy you included Donna. I love her advice. Thanks.

I think this is the best chapter yet. It's got everything. Childhood drama, first date nervousness, action, mystery, the villain, and of course the end. I like that you address how having a big brain has affected Felicity's life. I never liked mirakuru per se but your version of performance-enhancing drugs and brainwashing seems scary believable. Good job.

You have a clever way of weaving in quotes. Good job.

Yay! Then thwarted again. Great story.

The ending was so perfect. Everything was wrapped up so nicely. What an amazing journey this story has been. Oliver and Felicity have come along way and now they are together and happy. It was so cute how Oliver was missing Felicity and Thea knew just what her brother needed. I loved Oliver's gifts for Felicity. They were perfect. It didn't surprise me that Felicity might think that Oliver had changed his mind about them being together. After Oliver's confession of love for her though, she shouldn't have had any doubt that boy is crazy about her. He's finally happy. In fact everyone ended up where they needed to:) Diggle and Lyla are engaged. Tommy and Laurel are happy. Thea and Roy! Perfect perfect story. Loved everything about it. Thank you! Sorry it took me forever to read it! lol

I had a feeling that it would be Merlyn to kill Cooper. Literally laughed when Cooper thought he could just take off after everything. That's what he gets for getting into bed with a snake like Merlyn. Felicity was right, Lyla is a badass! So glad that Oliver went in with a plan and backup. He was finally able to defeat Merlyn without actually killing him. Talk about a hero:) Loved loved they way this chapter turned up. It was worth the wait to actually see Oliver defeat Merlyn.