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Cool story. Update.

Great story so far, I really like it. You do need to be more careful on Wylie's name though since I noticed you called her Harry multiple times in this chapter. I do look forward to the next one and hope you update again soon.

Like this story so far. I'd recommend going back over the chapters and checking the pronouns when you refer to our young heroine. I found a couple where you used his and in ch.11 you also forgot to change Harry into Wylie ;). Hope to see the next chapter soon. Thank you for writing.

Awesome! Is she going to tell anyone about her parentage? I wish to read about Snape's reaction when he finds out that her father is not James Potter. Also, can you make Snape legacy of Hades? Please?

When one of the twins becomes the voice of reason you know things have gone sideways.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Love It!
I like hades but he is married and this might turn unfavourable in her future situations.
I hope for pairing with Apollo. Update soon ! :)

Love It, I like hades but he is married and this might turn unfavourable in her future situations.
I hope for pairing with Apollo. Update soon ! :)

Loved it hope you update soon.

As for canon diversion, I would have to say.

1 - Snape needs to learn some humility (even if she is James adopted caught she still a demi and Snapes a** to others to. He doesn't even do his job. They don't know how to cut things certain ways or why for starters.) Not pranks but massive complaints sent Directly to the Education Lady since Dumbledore just ignores them. Not necessarily having him fire but he obviously 'shouldn't' be anywhere near anyone below 5th year. Maybe one of the other older Demi children could come and teach years 1-5?

2 - No being friends with Ron (Neville's 10xs better) and Hermione's 'OK' as an acquaintance but Luna, Susan, Hannah, and even Daphne would be better

3 - Draco needs to be 'put' in 'place'. If he wasn't such a bigot arrogant little sh*t he wouldn't so bad as a 'human'. His attitude is shameful... Unfortunately 75% of everything that is wrong with him is BC of is father.

4 - Have her mention the wraith so its existence gets back to Hades/Pluto and she has the the unknown prophecy the quest is obviously hers but she doesn't know there's a prophecy to prepare for so maybe they will tell her?

5 - While Poseidon can't visit maybe Neptune can take the loophole and visit, occasionly?

6 - Maybe Lady Hacate could see Wylie as one of her champions and point her in certain directions? Maybe a kettle to get the Potter Grimoire, to go to Gringotts for a 'full' inheritance test/abilities check (after second year.. So Potter, Black, Peverell, Gryffindor, Slytherin/Guant & Malfoy - through right of conquest... 3x against Tom, then Draco ducking out on the duel, Wylie betting the diary that Sr. But their, and then out smarting him of his house-elf which lead to confrontation.) A book on Mind Arts appearing for both her and Lee.

7 - Maybe a little 'advanced' studying? Like still doing Mundane Classes in the summer or papers from Chiron to be able to keep up? Shed probably want to take C.o.M.C. with all where monster attacks to be extra prepared, Divination BC the Demi Dreams, Ancient Runes BC she already would have a basis for Greek (even they they go through more), Arithmancy, and Astrology should be easy for her and the other Demis.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Hope to read more soon.

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