Reviews for Unexpected Company |
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Reader chapter 9 . 3/24 Dude i found this 4 yrs later Please finish this story |
G2 chapter 9 . 9/4/2019 Such an amazing story so far! Wish you would continue... |
Caroliny Hotchner chapter 1 . 8/15/2019 Adorei sua história mesmo. Vou ver tudo. |
duda bela cullen chapter 9 . 6/30/2017 Oi adorei a história é estou ansiosa pela continuação. Bj |
stefrosacarnevale chapter 9 . 6/16/2016 Amazing chapter update |
Guest chapter 9 . 6/16/2016 Not disappointed in the least! Ready to hear Jay's complete explanation of Gerrick's plan and looking forward to Steve learning that he has a little brother. It will be great seeing the two siblings work together to capture Gerrick. |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/13/2016 Oh my, I just knew the two were brothers. I can only imagine Steve's reaction when he finds out he has a little brother. Pride, love, protectiveness, wow, I feel like so many emotions will be vying for his attention. Also, certainly, some hurt, confusion and sadness at never knowing about his brother until now. And, I know Jace is going to learn that there could be nothing better than having an older brother named Steve Mcgarrett. Of course, that may take some time because, hey, without that, there would be no story. Please continue as soon as possible. Oh yeah, I do love this side of Joe. Nice work on his character. |
stefrosacarnevale chapter 8 . 6/13/2016 Amazing chapter update |
SandrA chapter 1 . 6/13/2016 Great chapter! I really enjoy it ! |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/11/2016 Great chapter...moves me to the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/11/2016 I feel as if I'm the only one shipping Steve/Jace |
stefrosacarnevale chapter 7 . 6/11/2016 Amazing chapter |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9/2016 I had to go back and reread the entire story because I couldn't remember anything about it. This is a great story and I do hope you will continue. I can't wait for Steve and Jace to figure out their connection or does Jace already know? Please continue soon. |
stefrosacarnevale chapter 6 . 6/8/2016 Amazing chapter update |
Sandy198802 chapter 5 . 1/11/2016 Great chapter |