Reviews for Evil
HalfaGhostGirl13 chapter 2 . 7/10
(meant to be posted for chap 3 but won't let me) Revisiting this story is enlightening, I finally get what the story was trying to teach- five years later t hasn't lost its touch.

I just wish I could see it come to a conclusion, really hope you can one day come back to it and we can have closure like Danny has with FredBear.
zixalZane chapter 3 . 6/11
*sitting in the dark corner and crying hard for phantom *
Why is the world is so cruel to him,

And i love the story.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/1/2019
Amazing stories I just read both and I loved them, top notch.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/20/2018
UPDATE PLZ
Shelby-The-Red-Mew chapter 3 . 4/17/2017
If there is a update plz let it be soon... still can't stop crying at this chapters ending it's so sad but in a "although it's sad it must happen kinda of way"...
Kurra chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
Omgs, this story is so GOOD! Please update at the next chance you have, even though it's been a year, so I don't think you will...
ParasiticSquid chapter 3 . 5/27/2016
Sooo.. pretty sure the fact humanity is unwilling to accept that literally DIEING can cause some serious pain for those who become ghosts, and by extension cause them to do things they normally wouldn't when lashing out at the world that basically killed them off in brutal and tragic fashions will only lead to the bottom of a slippery slope of sadness and rage at this point.

They don't seem to realise that while Phantom is a ghost, hes also human and has all those faults and weaknesses they have to a certain extent. If theres one common theme for every living person both young and old.. it's that everyone has a breaking point and one who is pushed to that point are the most dangerous of all. While Dannys ghost side is effecting him on a base level after maturing hes still mentally human mostly and after having literally the entire world hating him and watching something closer to you then anything a living human can understand destroyed in front of you im willing to bet Dannys NOT happy at the moment. Pretty sure no one is thinking about the fact that while yeah, he got people killed but at the same time he only recently realised that himself and exactly what that entails for him.

Speaking from a "Jazz" perspective attacking someone who has the power to literally destroy not only the world but the ghost zone as well to the point where even Clockwork himself, master of time, fears Danny on some level due to his possible futures is NOT a good idea if you don't want to provoke the apocalypse. The fact that Dan was massively outclassed despite what we already know hes capable of shows that this Danny is even more powerful and if he snaps... not even a isolated and condensed ghost shield will protect the remnants left over like it did with Dan.

And unless someone or something changes the current course I can gurantee it will lead to such a snap inevitably. The fact that Clockwork hasn't interfered yet despite the incoming nuclear warhead means that someone/something does stop the landslide since even a saints patients can be broken with enough effort and boy is everyone trying to break Dannys. As we already know it's basically canon that should a ghost bring about total destruction to either the zone or earth and even both it's in Clockworks job description to interfere and remove the culprit before that do it or prevent it from occuring in the first place.

So either he sees something stopping the onslaught and prevent Danny from breaking in the immediate future or the eyeballs are stopping him from doing so... either way doesn't matter, basically everyone is screwed and this can only end with a bang and a boom for everyone involved now after this chapter.
Phantomspirit14 chapter 2 . 1/2/2016
This was epic. I literally heard the sad music in my head as I read this.

But still. PATMAT! CURSE YOU!
Phantomspirit14 chapter 3 . 1/2/2016
DAMNIT PATMAT! WHY!
HalfaGhostGirl13 chapter 3 . 12/31/2015
Best fanfic ever. Poor Phantom and surely poor FredBear. Alsowhat will happen next? No FNAF 3?
socialgirl378 chapter 3 . 12/30/2015
And it looks like things have gone downhill. Well, shit. Goddamn that Youtuber! I feel really sad about what happened. Sad for Danny, the poor kids, the night guards (well, the ones who aren't total fuckin' pedophiles and child murderers), and Mary. Anyway, I'll come back when I see another chapter posted.

Oh, and thanks to your crossover story for giving me an idea for another crossover between Danny Phantom and Undertale. It's what happens if Danny's past life was one of the monsters who lived in the Underground. A certain monster who died from his injuries caused by humans.
Itharax chapter 3 . 12/26/2015
GREAT CHAPTER! I love it! The entire chapter is great! You did an amazing job on this!
Ps what was the songs name? If it has one I mean...

Have a great day! :)
Blazingkill chapter 3 . 12/26/2015
Great chapter but Dammit PatMat! Also Holy crap! Your still alive? Hope we get a new chapter soon!
socialgirl378 chapter 2 . 12/26/2015
Heh, this sounds a bit interesting. I have questions though: How did Danny's ghost form change? What exactly happen to him when he once worked at the pizzeria?
Blazingkill chapter 2 . 10/28/2015
Ooooooo can't wait to see what he does when that place goes up in smoke...well that's where I think you're going with this.
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