This was a great fanfic loved the detail in dialogue and the ending made me believe in their love and legacy go jump off of a cliff

This was an honest to god great fanfic I loved the detail about robin Lucina and Chrom’s bond and “legacy” go jump off a cliff

lmao you say that this was written by a 13 year old yet you act like a teen going through your "IT'S NOT A PHASE!" phase. Hilarious. You're pathetic "Legacy".

I liked it btw. angsty indeed

Very nice depiction of Chrom and Robin :) I don't really have any FE13 otps, but I did enjoy this :D

Excuse me "legacy" that was a very harsh review and anon, nonetheless. There is nothing wrong with the story, as I feel you let your feelings about Chrobin and perhaps the entire scene get in your way of judgement of the story. And honestly if you did feel this way, there was absolutely no need to make such an awful review, even telling the author to kill themselves. That was way out of line. I thought the story was fantastic, perhaps not the greatest story I've ever read, since there are so many out there, but a good one indeed. It /was/ angst. It might have no been a lot, but there was no need to complain and be a downer, people like you make me so angry.

And to you, dear author, don't let that review get you down. That was very rude of them and your story was good. It involved many feels and it hit me straight in my heart, possibly because I too married Chrom and had that same judgement scene. So write and post the "don't accept Lucina's judgement" scene. Write it as a big middle finger to the awful flame review. And just keep writing and getting better about it. And forget awful reviewers. Write what you want. Like you want. Love yourself.

On a lighter note, my OTPs are Robin x Chrom, Robin x Sumia, Robin x Cordelia, and Robin x Lucina. Oops lol

"Robin is Lucina's mother-" How about I stop you right there? Not only does that make this fic the harbringer of bad, forced pairings and bad, forced writing, but also almost completely guarantees the failure of the writing based around the fact that this pairing's main gimmick is that of the two being main characters and being "quirky". But, I digress.

Literally what was this pathetic attempt at writing? Angst, you say? Then what exactly was the angst other than "oh yeah mother let me just FRICKING KILL YOU", which is practically a paragon of bad writing in itself anyway? Trash tier writing that only serves to cement Lucina as a bad character with flat writing is the only thing I could get out of the post Chapter 21 dialogue, and let's face it, the conversation merely gets worse and a tad bit inexcusable with Robin as Lucina's mother.

Bad writing ensues, and bad writing follows as such in what appears to have been a rather futile attempt at creating angst through writing for that terrible, terrible scene. Of course, that's not to say this is literally a trash story in general with bad writing on your part. Literally what is up with these inexcusable writing mistakes? Couldn't you have at least learned how to read and write before you came onto this site to spread your poison and filth?

But, again, I digress. My main point is that this is a pointless mess of a story, if it can even be called that, and that you should probably take it down and then kill yourself, you absolute 13 year old. Absolutely pathetic, you miserable excuse for a writer. I suggest that you remove yourself from this site along with your bad writing.

Get a hold of yourself Robin! I only cried for 2 minutes and lose my sanity for 5 days because of that part until I see Morgan and Nah support make restore my sanity.

Back to topic, I personally like dark and sappy genre like yours. I like the moment when Lucina try to stab her mother and Robin accepts it. Oh... I love that despair moment.

Sorry, I meant "My OTP" not "The OTP"

Awesome story.
The OTP is Chrobin. I also like HenryxOlivia, Lon'quxLissa, FrederickxSumia, and CordeliaxStahl.