I cannot tell you how many times I've read this series of yours both on here and wattpad. My only complaint is that I can never find the follow up from this particular spot. The next part I'm ever able to find has a major time skip that always leaves me partly confused. Just thought I'd let you know how much I love it and that I'm sure at LEAST 20 views our mine lol

Please come back

Please come back to this! Please, please!

Hello, hope you are okay and very much hoping you haven't abandoned this. 100% my favourite stargate fanfic, and I've never disliked anything you have published :)

Please post the other stories in this collection, i just finished reading this one and absolutely loved it only to find seasons 2 through 7 missing but there's an 8? Please

This is a good story, I look forward to more.

Lovely chapter cant wait to see you update your storytelling soon

Yay! Another chapter! Even though it has been awhile, I still can't wait when the real excitement goes down. And it was really funny when kate broke todd, now his dreams are going to be that more spicy! ;D

I Love this story, Todd, the Sheppard family and back story o what lead them to where they are now. I hope there is more coming soon. Hope you have John wake up and get with Teyla some how. He deserves some love too, plus they make a great couple.

As promised, my actual review to your lovely work:

Hello you! It is great to see an update! I wish you the best of luck with the trials and tribulations of real life and extend my most sincere condolences to you and your family. Reading your work is always worth the wait, but I did come across a few things you might want to address; to sum up, some of the plot development between this chapter and the last that happened behind the scenes could use some more explanation and 2 grammar things. I understand time skips are necessary to get a story moving, but this chapter references a number of happenings and key plot points that occur after the last chapter and before this one (unless I am forgetting things, which is possible after this last month I’ve had!). Normally, I would be a fan of such details providing greater context or callbacks to earlier chapters, but there is a difference between a call back and an introduction to something really out of the blue that does not seem to be directly built upon a foundation that had been laid earlier. As for the points that I believe could use some additional attention: what happened with the fallout of the last chapter (Michael*, Kate’s new abilities/Todd’s teaching style), the fact that she and Todd seem to be an actually item now with Ronon giving advice*, whatever Woolsey/Carter/Todd shenanigans that got him to Earth with hella fine clearance that just let him walk around (I know it is explained due to recommendations, but someone should throw a fit over it and be sorted out, or at least a flashback to a conversation of getting Todd clearance; also, how did they get Todd to go back to the Milky Way after all that which happened there)*, and Carter’s beneficence in regard to what to do with the missing Wraith instead of letting Todd deal with him due to the logistics of it. *indicates things that are more necessary for plot flow. For nit picking spelling (better than voice outload out loud; she’ll get too attacked attached). Of course, this is only what I think and as the author you know much more of what you are doing than I!

But aside from my hopefully constructive criticism, allow me to wave my hands in excitement and tell you what particular shiny things caught my eye! I liked the call back to Todd’s imprisonment with the Genii and the information it provides (70 years, jeez was he not joking when he said many in canon/it is known to, at least, some of the Wraith under Todd’s command that he was imprisoned; how that information affects Todd’s standing and if anyone is sufficiently suicidal to bring that up to him are two very interesting questions). Also, I really question the lab’s security protocols (false confidence about what they had heard about Todd’s [presumed] compliance after season 5, not knowing that maybe the space vampire is dangerous, idiots in charge, etc; I am not complaining, just judging people for lax security).

I like the extra detail we learn about the Sheppard siblings and family dynamics (thanks #I am a sucker for worldbuilding). HA, Aquaman; nice! Shout out to David for being emotionally stable in comparison to the rest of his siblings. I think Todd will, at some point, enjoy taking advantage of the opportunity to rip apart the IOA or their representatives. Thanks for giving us the Halling description, that helps! A bit more detail on what Kate thinks of not-Wraith Todd would be useful; she might know what she thinks, but as a reader it threw me for a loop. And here I thought Todd was Todd because of physical characteristics instead of personality traits, but why not both! In regard to the Daedalus thing, perhaps Todd undertook those actions because maybe TJ was supposed to be on one of the hives and thus appeared to have been killed? 12,740; it was fun to have Todd and John talk about his age and offspring! All in all, I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next (as usual)! Best of luck with real life and the Muse!

Great chapter, had to go back and reread the whole story to figure out what was going on, but that's kind of normal. Keep up the good work. Minor note, not a complaint, just a kind of concern, despite your mentioning that this was made with several goals and among those was showing down the relationship between Kate and Todd, they seem to be going faster than in your original. By this point, I'm not sure how much either of them was really considering being actively together, but it's been a while since I read that, so I may be wrong.

This is a fun story with a nice writing style. I'm happy that you recognized the Mary Sue hazard in your rewrite by giving your OC some flaws, and kudos for writing in the 3rd person not 1st (common mistake).

I"m only up to ch3 (haven't read the original) but so far it looks really good.

I'm glad that you are continuing to write because you are so good at it! I hope that it brings you some joy as well, as it certainly brings all of us joy to read your work! Thank you so much for the update! That was a really enjoyable chapter to read. Actually, I had a bit of fun and reread the whole thing againSoooo good the second time around too. I reiterate what I said last time, that this is a great story so far! You really took the time to develop the characters and it makes it very enjoyable to read. I really liked this vacation editthe shopping sequence was my favorite and I love how we get to see Kate taking a more active role in progressing her relationship with Todd. The only thing I think I was missing was getting to see Todd work with Kate on her new mental abilities! He seemed so baffled by them at the end of the last chapter, so I kinda missed getting to see that progress for then. Other than that though, I think this was a great update. I really liked seeing the Sheppard family and seeing Todd welcome back his younger hive member at the end. really lovely! Thank you again!

Sorry to hear things have been so tough, to be honest it sounds uncannily like my year too so I can totally sympathise. Reading your new chapter really, really made my day though, and I'm so glad you're still writing so I'll try and give you a long detailed review in return.

I loved the original season 7 and 8 and it was a good thing to leave it up as it's a great piece of work in its own right, but this story has so much more complexity and character development. Generally speaking I like the Wraithy bits best, but I think it's great how you've taken minor characters from the show like David Sheppard and given them more depth and also shown us more Sheppard family dynamics.

It's always interesting to see wraith culture explored, and you can see how much potential there is for misunderstandings between Kate and Todd considering their completely different expectations and assumptions, which makes for plenty of good drama. On a wider level it makes this story seem very relevant in the troubled and divided world we live in as you see two individuals and also two peoples trying to find peace and understanding when they have radically different cultures, belief systems and even different conceptions of morality. I enjoyed the journey Todd and Kate made (and are still making) from the beginning, when Todd is essentially a wraith supremacist who believes humansfood/slaves, (after all this is part of the cultural baggage he must have inherited) and how Kate manages to use logic and example to challenge his preconceptions and enable him to see past his prejudices. And by the way, Todd and Victoria's Secret was priceless!

My own personal favorite part of this chapter was at the end when Todd explains to his subordinate why he came back for him. It both illuminates part of his character and confirms what all Todd fans really believe-he's the hero and is going to save the Pegasus Galaxy;) I certainly look forward to watching him try, and am looking forward to seeing how it all ends.

I hope things get better for you. Take care.

Oh my god I love itttttt