"And then..."? And then what?

This story was so sad and poignant but still cute! Thanx for the read.

Absolutely gorgeous characterisation and expansion on the episode! Their interactions a realistic and echoing of both the wishverse and buffyverse! Good job!

u got to continue, ur story is great, can't wait to read more, so plz update soon!

This story is amazing. It's so ridiculously good, incredibly well written. I loved every word, except for the lie at the end: "to be continued..."

Oh well. You wrote this out so beautifully, I think I'll just sit here now and let the rest play out in my own head. It won't be nearly as good as anything you would have come up with, but I guess it will have to do.

a very good story, haven't heard of other fics like this in a while, and they were short ones. Q: if buffy and angel were to get it on in there, would the other vamps take that as a sign to rape her? what will happen to larry? what oz's and giles' plan? will they go to the bronze and take out as many there and find buffy and angel and they all go to the factory and destroy it and has a happy ending? or will they go to the factory straight away and end up dead? please update soon.

hi, are you still going to update this story because i really liked it

Not nice and not fair and how bloody impolite of you. Grumble. This is such a great fic. I'm devastated you didn't finished. Now you've moved on with your life and that's just-well, okay, reasonable and understandable, but still :o)

I know what it's like to lose the writing bug. Actually, I don't; I'm always writing; it's just I generally start a fic and then lose interest and abandon all my beginnings. But the world doesn't have to be this way. Sometimes an insistent reviewer reminds me that oh yeah, that story was freakin' GOOD, and maybe I should finish it.

Well, here it is, your wake up call, and are you interested in our continental breakfast?

Ah well. Needless to repeat, this is a good fic. I love what you've done with Buffy and Angel's connection. Due to their mutual life experiences I can't see them falling into each others' arms, but it's interesting they still feel the spark-and I love how annoyed Buffy is with it at first. Kudos on some nifty characterization there. I also like how much you focus on Angel watching Buffy in LA. I mean, he does claim that he was in love with her before he met her, and I love the glimpses we've seen of him falling for her in that period. No one seems to write about that time much (it always gets mentioned, esp. what Buffy is doing to that sucker before she gets called, but no one ever mentioned the things Angel must've watched that weren't actually shown on the series. I like that you imagined them and keep bringing them up.)

Let's see...Oh, I also like what you're doing with VampWillow; she feels much more real than some people's VampWillow, and her reasons for returning to the Bronze to bring Angel to the factory opening thing seemed very realistic. I also like what you're doing with Oz; it makes sense that if one thing is different others would be different too.

Now, get all inspired by this review and do something crazy, like finish the fic ;o) And, if not-well, I still really enjoyed reading what you have. I guess it's better to have read and lost than never read at-okay, stopping.

It's a good story you should continue with it. I'd like to know what happens next and its too good of a plot to throw away. PLEASE! - finish it.

OMG. YOU MUST UPDATE THIS STORY.

I'm not kidding ! This is really good !

Please continue...

-n

AG! Just my luck. I've read two awesome stories tonight,a nd both haven't been updated in ages! Is there more on your website? I justmight ahve to check it out...
But please update. This story rocks, and that last comment, the hands, i so didn't get that. Made no sense what so ever. Please update, so i know what you mean!
Well, I'll check out the site, seriously hoping the link works and there's more there. I really don't mind the NC-17 stuff.
But PLEASE UPDATE!
thanks!

*a moment of shocked silence*
I don't think I've ever read a story that was so...awesome. The way you do the first person...I can never do a good first person, and the way things are slowly, but surley progressing...oh! I lvoe it! It's beautiful and precious, and I love it!
And I have to read mroe. So I'll see you after the next chapter, because I'm dying of suspence, though I know what's going to happen next.
where did you get the names for the chapters? they're soo interesting!

continue! its a really good start!

Woah, very cool. I liked where the story came from and it could easily be screwed up. Buffy being too...open, but it was nice. Keep it going.

I cant give in critizism this story is really really good. I have read it twice. Please update soon. thanks