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I am looking forward to chapter 4 and I hope Naruto's first Fraction be Shizuka of Nadeshiko village.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Amazing so far but needs to be longer and naruto should also be stronger and please give him a zunpacto of fire type like yamamotos cause i like him more than even ichigo

You need to come back and continue the fanfic.I like it a lot.

...I'm not even gonna bother summing up how bad I found this. Suffice to say, it was terrible.

I like the espadas as they are, so he should be a fraccion of espada 1. I like Stark better than Grim-kitty.

no no this is good naruto cant just get op really quick i think you would really lose a lot of readers that way but i really like the idea that naruto being an apprentice. now Grimmjow not my first pick but i see that it would be the most logical chose seeing as how he really would do this but the person i would have choose would have been Ulquiorra Cifer mostly because i think he would make naruto not less angry but more in control of his emotions unlike Grimmjow where he can become strong but he can't find peace as easily but if he dose that is when he becomes truly terrifying because he can evolve into something new he can lose his hollow ability's and becomes like ichigo and can take his mask on and off well that's my two cents

if you make him an Espada make him 5, if he is a fraccion make it to 1
Either way give him a double release like Ulquiorra

Intriguing. I say he should be Espada numero 7. That way, he's still behind Grimmjow (as Grimmjow IS stronger) but still strong enough to be an Espada and nearly Grimmjow's equal in strength. Or, you could possibly make both the same rank? It's been done before I think. Just a thought. However, should he be a Fraccion, he should be in Grimmjow's party.

Eh... make him Espada 7 or 8 and boot the old 9th out of them.

I actually agree that the chapter seemed a little weak, but I'm sorry that I can't really pin it down. Your grammar could use some improvement, but that's not what's causing it.

Plus, letting the readers decide anything is usually a terrible idea.

Fraccion I felt like Naruto should be Espada 2 if he is gonna be StrongNaruto, but if making it more balance maybe the Espada 5. And it can be more fun and interesting to see who is stronger between Naruto and Grimmjow if you make them a rival.

as an espied make naruto number 7 because i feel that Zommari Rureaux was bloody pointless
if fraccion then make him starks because has no fraccion seeing as lilynette and stark are one being

So... we don't actually know what he looks like. We know his mask has no expression, but not what it looks like. We don't know whether he's humanoid or animalistic. We don't know why he's wearing clothes when no other hollow does so. So many questions.

Aaand hopefully the story is still moving forwards. It's been awhile, but I've always liked Hollow Naruto stories.

This was amazing, looking forward to more