Reviews for Benefits of old laws |
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OnaJB72 chapter 16 . 1h I think you must be mad, and I like it. |
OnaJB72 chapter 5 . 7/24 amazing writing so far |
Guest chapter 57 . 7/23 I think it is fine calling them erker windows. Have also heard people call those type of windows- bay windows, bow windows, garden windows, and dormers. Not sure what if any the subtle differences are, but suspect most people wouldn't know either, unless in the window trade. |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/21 All of Hogwarts, Dumbles and staff included, could have benefited from the occasional common sense pop quiz. |
Sora'sOtherForm chapter 50 . 7/22 Wouldn't Theo refer to Harry as Henry? |
Sora'sOtherForm chapter 12 . 7/20 also, save, instead of safe |
Sora'sOtherForm chapter 12 . 7/20 I'm not sure if you are still monitoring the reviews for this story, but there are a few typos in this chapter that could be easily rectified. you use sight instead of sigh, and strife instead of strive |
VashonBeader chapter 108 . 7/14 I did not see this coming, and absolutely love it. I had difficulty at the beginning of the story accepting that Voldemort wouldn't just start killing people randomly. But, I kept reading. I loved the pace of this story, and the details. I love the character development, and the family scenes. I have loved reading this, and didn't know if the Dark Lord was going to survive. Great job, just thoroughly, a wonderful job! I have enjoyed reading this so much! I don't want it to end. Thank you for writing and sharing! |
DaisyG chapter 70 . 7/8 You are an extraordinary writer! What a find this story is! |
VashonBeader chapter 63 . 7/9 Very clever to use a nightlight spell transformed into something of nightmares for the Dark Mark! I have not been reviewing and saying thank you. So, Thank YOU! Great story - truly enjoying it! |
Guest chapter 100 . 7/7 I know I’m a little late to the story but I am thoroughly enjoying it! For some reason, Chapter 101-104 aren’t on here though and I’m afraid I might miss something important! |
creativesm75 chapter 109 . 7/7 great fanfic. |
VashonBeader chapter 6 . 7/5 I am so enjoying this story! Binge reading without stopping to say "Thank You!" I truly appreciate your writing efforts - great story! I'm on the edge of my seat, and can't wait to read the next chapter! Great job! |
Minerva394 chapter 94 . 7/4 I am reading Benefits again for the fourth Ort fifty time and still am discovering new avenues I overread before like Healer Greengrass and Bill before the ritual. Thank you an incredibly complex and multilayered story! |
WastedOnYou4580 chapter 109 . 6/30 I cannot find words for how absolutely FANTABULOUS this story is. It is definitely in my top three, if not my favorite. I wish more people would find it, because this is REALLY DAMN AMAZING. |