Reviews for HOTR
AvengingDemonSpawn666 chapter 4 . 3/23
I'm loving this. Please update soon.
Lizliade chapter 3 . 9/10/2019
Hello !
Sorry, I amn'ot register in the site.
I'm French, and my english is very bad. I read your story and I saw that you spoke a bit French inside (it's right?).
I allowed myself to correct you.
(I love your story ! It is very interesting !)
I begin :

"Bienvenue, M. Potter!" She smiled kindly at him. "Voulez-vous bien prendre le siège (or "voulez vous bien vous installer sur le siège)à côté de M. Asher, s'il vous plait? M. Asher, levez votre main pour M. Porter."

"Pratiquer avec votre partenaire!" The teacher called out as Harry awkwardly turned to Asher.

(Practice with your parters)

"Bonjour." Asher grinned at him. "Mon francais est vraiment terrible (or "horrible" or "mauvais" are great)!" The boy winked at him. "Mes connaissances sont vraiment insuffisantes, et j'ai besoin, heu (it corresponds " uh" or "er" in english), à plus de, heu, pratique (or "entrainement")." The boy shrugged.

(Hello. My French is really bad. My knowledge is really lacking, and I need to practice more.)

Harry grinned broadly. "Tu me… rappelles mon…. meilleur ami, Ron." Harry told him. He hoped he recalled the right words.

(You remind me of my friend Ron)

"Ah, Grazie, credo che!" The boy grinned as the teacher walked up behind them.

"C'est un cours de français, M. Ahser. Non pas d'italien! (Or " Et non d'italien !")" She admonished, frowning deeply at the boy.

(This is a French class. It's not for Italian.)

"Désolé." He shrugged, grinning at her. "Mais mon italien est vraiment meilleur que mon francais." (or " Mais mon italien est largement mieux que mon français" but the first is more... How do you say "poli" or "formel" in english ? ;p)

(Sorry. But my Italian is much better than my French.)

"Si vous passiez autant de temps à travailler votre français que vous le faîtes avec l'italien, vous n'auriez pas cette excuse !" She snapped, glaring at ahser.

(If you spent the same amount of time studying French as you did Italian you wouldn't have an excuse.)

"Sono cresciuto parlando italiano." (It is not french) He replied, a heavy Italian accent pouring from his mouth.

(I grew up speaking Italian.)

"Ca suffit, je vous ai assez entendu pour aujourd'hui." The teacher snapped, stalking away from the

I finished !
I hope I have not disturbed you. Continu your story, it's great!
(I may make an account and contact you, so if you want to communicate with me, it will be a pleasure!)
Bye bye !
D00rFr4m3 chapter 4 . 7/29/2018
That was weirdI thought Harry was wanted for Ginny's murder to begin with?

Good chapter, though. This was a pretty good read, thanks for writing it.
D00rFr4m3 chapter 3 . 7/29/2018
Is the main pairing going to be slash? As in, is Harry going to be with a guy? I'm perfectly fine with it in side pairings, just not so much the main pairing. And besides, this is marked as Harry/Rosalie. Which is why I'm reading it to begin with.
D00rFr4m3 chapter 2 . 7/29/2018
Pretty good so far! Mr.E is an interesting character, and I like your ideas behind the American magical system.
MissJu-chan chapter 4 . 7/9/2018
Hi it’s cool :)
fifespice chapter 4 . 7/1/2018
bloody hell so whats next
fifespice chapter 3 . 7/1/2018
love this
Guest chapter 4 . 5/25/2018
I absolutely love this fic! It feels very natural and realistic (as much as a fic with magic and vampires can, but you know. It does) and the characters are spot on. It's not your typical Harry-moves-to-Forks-and-oh-look-sexy-vampires-now-kiss fic that I've read (and occasionally enjoyed), this fic has more depth and character development, more... Something. I don't know what, but something. And I can't wait for more!
Mephys chapter 4 . 5/1/2018
I like your fic, it's really interesting :)
kagome higurashi chapter 4 . 4/27/2018
please write some more. it's good. will harry reveal that he knows the cullens are vampires, or will they reveal their secret to him. will he found out about the la push wolves.
Niekelien chapter 4 . 4/26/2018
I love this, I wonder how this news will affect him with the Cullens at school
MoonLitReader chapter 4 . 4/6/2018
I love this so much
Almonda chapter 4 . 4/5/2018
Im am so glad, I found this fic today! I am down with bronchitis and this fic brough me some needed laughter..even if it turns into a coughing fit lol...I just love your take on this crossover pairing.
Lucinda Silver chapter 4 . 4/3/2018
Love the story, I can't wait to read more!
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