Cant wait to see how this story progresses

No one is playing "The Game" when it doesn't fucking exist. Your character with the name "Naruto" is a slave under Rias, a "high class" devil so low on the food chain even amongst Devils. "Naruto" isn't vicious, he's a lapdog who can be easily tossed around. His only safeguard is the fact that his master is Lucifer's sister and that's it.

An enjoyable read

Just wanted to say this story is amazing so glad I stumbled upon it

The story seemed good, promising, but it is only another cliche and generic story in which Naruto becomes a slave to the nobility of demons. like 99% of Naruto's other stories with dxd. Dropped

I enjoyed reading this story, but I did find some problems from it (at least for me). Mainly, it would be Issei. Now I get why most people hate his character, from getting his power "easily" to being a perverts, but I fell like you purposely made his character worse than it should be to make Naruto look better. Like the whole Rias trying to sleep with him scene would not have happen because he does not have the courage to do so (due to his "PTSD" from Raynare). Another thing I didn't like is the characters beating him to near death just to sate their raging murder boners. Like I get that he has to be disciplined, or whatever, but there are so many better ways to go about. For example, why not have Naruto and Issei in a room and talk things out and explain the points of view to each other. Issei is not a complete idiot (as shown by his ability to command the peerage in Kyoto), nor is he so arrogant to believe that he is without flaws. He knows that his perverse behavior makes him an outcast, but he does not want to give up on his dream. He is like Emiya Shirou when it come to his dream. They both know that their dreams are flawed or not accepted by many, but they still keep going and believe in it. You can see his character progress through out the light novels. You can see him mature as he encounters more and more foes. Honestly, I don't understand why most authors choose to ignore these facts and focus on his negatives. And I am not saying that you have to like him or that he is an amazing protagonist. No, he's not. But you could use that to your advantage and make him grow as a secondary character(since Naruto is the protagonist) through the guidance of others beside him. That would honestly be better than what you did with him in your story. Think about, Naruto sits with him explains to him why he could not be with Rias and also puts the supernatural world into perspective for Issei (since he is still new to it). You slowly let them talk periodically and have them argue and bicker with each other, until Issei fully realizes the situation that he is in. He would respect Naruto and everyone else a lot more and would ask for training while also cementing his deep loyalty with the group. With everything I said, I still enjoy this story quite a lot and find it interesting, which is why it pains me that I see this part of the story sour the experience for me. I hope you can continue writing because you are really good. Also you don't have to take my suggestion seriously, after all it is just a suggestion and this is your story. Anyway, good luck with your writing.

My response to your opening statement in the next chapter ... Ummmm he has only two things in common with Naruto as you stated and none of them make up the personality of the original Naruto your Naruto is cold calculating seemingly uncaring does not inspire others through stupid yet unselfish actions he just pushes people to do thier best and not caring if they achieve that or not So YES in my opinion and probably MOST OTHERS your character is a Original Character just named Naruto

Your writing is good but you confuse the hell out of people with it and that's why I'm not going further in this it doesn't make sense half the time

Your character is Not cannon Naruto so it IS a OC just named Naruto Wich reminds me more of Black Butler
Sebastian than Naruto

It's a good story, I love it since I started reading it, I hope it continues soon, greetings, we're waiting for the update, bye!

Update Blood Born

Please update soon. This is one of the best crossover fanfic out there and it would be a shame not to complete it. Looking forward for the next chapter.

Por que este naruto tiene bigotes acaso es el original o que es jinchuriki no verdad entonces es estupido que los tenga sobre todo por que siempre fueron estupidos :v por dios ni si quiera tienen relevancia para la aosriencia de naruto de hecho se veria mejor si no tubiera esa mierda en la cara siempre hacen lo mismo escritor puto :v

I so love people with your kind of minds... never in my crazy ass brain could I imagine of something of a "Vampire Jesus" fic to actually exist... man this is such a great read... I live for authors like you... Thank You!

Tiamat coming to kouh is gonna be interesting.
Also i feel that interactions with valerie are too less to suffice, and i like her hobby being highlighted in chapters. Is it possible if she moves with him or being on the same boat as krul?