Loved it. Simply loved it.

Great little fic

I blushed while reading this story. Very well written ! I found it very erotic. I have read several stories written by this author and does really descriptive writing

I've re read this a few times bc its just so perfectly done!

re-read this the best.

Haha! What a delight! Well done x

omg I love it! I saved reading this ch for when I needed something reeeealll good...and u never disapoint,do u? :)))

So I read this on the plane - with business guy sitting next to me. Smut reading surrounded by business men...it's my new thing now! It makes me happy that you turned the story around and found a way to make it work! I love it that Charles notices and shows Elsie what she missed in the afternoon :).

my heart is thumping!.. that was a very real first night. you wrote this very well! so well, I was beginning to perspire myself, along with our sexy butler.
But please don't stop here... please consider sharing with us... what he showed her ... in the afternoon... swoon...

Well that was a sweet read. Very caring and tender.

Oh. Sweet smut! How I love thee!

Awesome story, I loooooooved it! ;D

Oh, my. This was just...delicious.

Although it makes me a bit sad for Elsie, I do appreciate the fact that she didn't orgasm. It seems more realistic to me, given era and that it was her first time. I AM glad she enjoyed it, though! You wrote it wonderfully. I was desperate for an update all weekend, and I'm so pleased with this one! Thank you! I hope you'll write more of these deliciously smutty fics in future.

Argh! Beautiful! I love your writing so much, you always leave wanting to read more. xx

I loved the gentleness between the two of them and how Charles promised to show Elsie exactly what she had missed out on during their first time together. It was a lovely final chapter, to a beautiful story.