His name is Barley, not Bailey, but otherwise I'm really liking this chapter! Keep going, don't let the lack of reviews get you down! I know what you're feeling like because just recently I spent forever writing a chapter for one of my stories, but I got no reviews on it :_( its just something that happens sometimes to everyone, just keep writing! May StarClan shine down apon you :)

This is an interesting idea. I look forward to seeing more of it!

This is great so far, I love that Snowkit now has this inner conflict because he lived

Do you think you can make the chapters longer? Still an AWESOME story. This is Nightflame203 talking as a guest. ;) ;)

good so far

I love it!

SOUNDS AWESOME! can you PLZ post the next chapter?

Off to a great start! Can't wait to read more!

OMG love it! Update soon Shadeyflower

Nice job!
Can't wait for the next chappie! :)

Nice! You've got some great stories!

OMG.
When I saw this story, I freaked.
Because Snowkit's death was the ONLY death I cried over.
O.O
Please bring him back!

While this sounds like a cool plot with potential, I don't really think Snowkit could ever have a concept of hearing or hating not being able to hear. No one would have ever been able to explain to him that sound exists and he can't hear it, so it wouldn't make sense for him to hate something he doesn't even know existed.

I like the chapter! keep up the good work!