Just wanted to say how much I loved this story. you got the infliction just right, could hear the voices perfectly. And the quotes just summed up the story and the pair of friends so well.

Sigh, if only the writers of the show could come up with good stuff like this for us to actually see, the show would be that much better. Thank you for writing what we all wanted to happen but never does! : )

This is so good
I wish they had a Jay and Mouse scene in the actual episode
I loved this story! You're a great writer

Great work. Love their friendship and major props for the Pooh quotes. Catch ya on the flip side.

Nice to read something from the guy's pov. Good take on Mouse and his friendship with Jay. Thanks for sharing!

love this! there are not enough scenes with jay and mouth on chicago pd ;-)

That's it. That's exactly what I was looking for! I've read this story three times so far and I feel it's not enough yet. Thank you for that! I'd really love to see this scene at the end of the first episode. It really fits. Mouse and Jay have this special bonding and you presented it in excellent, realistic way! Keep going, I'm waiting for more of your work!

Not only was this a great friendship story but the quote at the end was SO PRECIOUS. Got me right in the feels!

Loooooooved this. You wrote Mouse so well! The way he talks, I could basically hear him. You captured their dynamic perfectly and since they're quickly becoming my fave brotp, I am so glad you wrote this!

Finally. Someone is writing a fanfic of these two. Jay is treating his friend like his younger brother and I'd love the show to dig deeper into their previous history in military. And here, the simplicity of the whole scene is so on point. I like it that you stay in characters. Thank you.

Beautiful!

Finally! I can't believe this is hapenning!
I'm dying to read ff about Jay /Mouse friendship!
Definitely they have too little time on the screen together. I missed that scene at the end of 3x01. I think I wanted to see how Mouse visits Jay , more than Erin visits Jay.

I love them, and connot wait to see some Jay-Mouse bromance scenes in show! Moustead is my new love. This story made me smile today and thank you very much for that.
Mouse consoling Jay is great.I hope you will write about them something else :)

In your story, you can see that Mouse is very worried about Jay and he's a true friend.
It's not like in the show, where Jay is in the hospital and everyone (even his brother) is drinking beer at the bar... that was wired for me.

I was hoping that we will get something like this in today's episode. How Mouse talking to Jay? or something? But no one ever mentioned about what happened to Jay. And I know that this topic is closed now. pity :(

honestly? I don't even know how to say, why I like this story so much.
You are the first person that wrote Moustead. At least for me because, I haven't seen Moustead story before. So..for me you're a true artist;)
I do not believe this is happening
I hope you write anything else about Jay- Mouse because you are great in this :)

PS: 3x03, it looks like we'll get Moustead (can't wait) but we have to wait. I hope that the creators give us something they don't disappoint us. But I get this fear. you know?

This is really really good! I've been waiting for someone to write a Moustead Brotp ff for ages! And you did it beautifully. Thank you!

Very, very good. Great work.

Great story! I honestly was annoyed at how no one mentioned nor was there any signs of jays toture on this week's Eppy. Seriously, he recovers from that that quickly?! Next week's Eppy looks great tho, with some Mouse angst!