| Reviews for The Return |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 5/27 If you gonna be stubborn like that,that just dumb and if someone gonna do a Sasuke they need the bashing |
 tiger9868 chapter 9 . 4/26 please update |
| koseta.a chapter 4 . 10/12/2019 You never explain this yonnin crap... |
| nikki nein chapter 3 . 9/18/2019 no not the tomato. she is gonna be like kushina when they push her and she starts becoming the red habanaro |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/31/2019 You boo b |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/30/2019 wtf you made her a faggot wtf wrong with you you fucking dumbass sicko |
| LordLucifer666 chapter 6 . 8/19/2019 There are far too many needless flashbacks |
| wtf chapter 3 . 4/13/2019 hope you don't make toka a fucking lezbo faggot cause that would ruin the story cause putting her with the dumb bitch hyuuga hope that bitch dies fuck her hate that bitch |
| silver.blast96 chapter 5 . 1/18/2019 Shitfic just give up |
| Rebmul chapter 9 . 1/17/2019 give this was last updated years ago id say the updates stoped this is a really good fic and that's a shame that they stoped |
| I am the The Shadow chapter 8 . 12/28/2018 I like your story but you need to drop Jiraiya and shizune pairing it just doesn't work and it's not believable so please fix it for this final path of the story I'm just pulling it out just doesn't work but the rest of the story decent thank you happy holidays |
| Elektra Ran chapter 9 . 10/24/2018 Please update... I really like your story... |
| Hmason chapter 6 . 10/13/2018 while i USUALLY dislike flashbacks i DO think you're doing them well since they add backstory to Naru/Tsu and it's cute |
| metalsonic2000 chapter 9 . 6/29/2018 What is taking so long to updare! |
| yudhazebba chapter 9 . 4/23/2018 Nice |
