This was so good, and felt so "real" within the "UBW universe" mainly because of how you explored Shirou and Rin's mindsets. It was really melancholic at times, and happy at others, the way you described their relationship is very beautiful, I love this couple and I believe you summed up everything I think about why these 2 are perfect together. I wish one day you can maybe continue this or write something more about Shirou x Rin.

Omg this was so good! There really is no moment in the show where Shirou really cries, so this was really nice. Love it!

Sooooooo beautiful! You portrayed the characters very well :D Also, love your writing style. Totally immersive! Thanks for sharing such amazing fic ;D

Shirou's musings of Illya made me tear up, I'm glad he isn't alone this time even if he is hell-bent to fulfill that dream.

Wow! That was good

wow. just wow. Loved it!

For an oneshot, it's a bit too prolix for me. But nevertheless, it's still a very enjoyable read, and with a little cleaner arrangement, it'd be perfect.

Beautifull... i cant say anything else.

Wow great job! Really well written. I feel like you captured their relationship perfectly.

This was a great read, it kept to the source material really well. I think any fan of the show will have no problem liking this add on.

Goddamn invisible ninjas chopping onions under my eyes *sniff*
One of the best one-shots of my OTP for fate/stay night, thanks for this and *sniff* goddamn! Stop you little demons! Illya affected me enough already!

Good story, full of drama and nostalgic moments.

Oh the feel...

Those feels man you are good at this

Aaaa this story was really good. Muh feelz.