Wow i dont review but this was great and i loved the little fluff moments

That made me laugh sooo much. Awesome story.

Sooooooooooooo where's the smut bitch

Ha ha ha! Oh, it's great to see Sabo's threat come full circle. This story was really cute and I'm gonna miss it. Great work.

Hahha amazing story! :D

The interrogation duel and Nami asking for money made me laugh. Thank you for writing this! I'm rather interested in the story about Luffy living with Law.

Brillant fantastic awesome story! I loved it!

I slid on into this fanfiction only to find out it ends next chapter? Wow (insert laughing emoji)
OKAY BUT THIS STORY IS ACTUALLY SO CUTE
Luffy is all innocent and fluffy and Law is just there hating his life more than usual and God I can't get enough of it
Jfc though I feel so bad for Law
LUFFY COMPLETELY ANNIHILATING LAW IN THE VIDEO GAMES WAS HYSTERICAL
Lmao please update soon :)

Aw the next is the last this is a really good fic. Can't wait for the next one though.

Love the story and great chapter! Keep up the great work!

Thanks for the update!

Gah! You end it there?! No fair. But that was a fantastic chapter! Mingo's here!

Oh if you're on the LawLu week band wagon you can check out my story if you want to :)

This chapter was so cute. Law was excited about what Luffy said *.*. Nami is a yaoi fangirl! That makes me think maybe she going to help in the relationship of Law and Luffy. And Ace…xD he is very protective as usual with Luffy xD.

I'm feeling like the characters became a little ooc now... you already know my opinion for Ace, but Garp and Dragon are the same to me, and Law's little too worried about what people think, he's tougher than that (I'm sorry if I don't speak very well English btw, this is not my native language xD) and Luffy's attitude is too nice, it's like there's something missing you see?
But anyway, thank you for writing this fanfiction!

I was glad I found it, I enjoyed it a lot!
Plume-now

I've never understood why was Ace always considered as an overprotective brother. It's really weird. I mean, okay, it's funny sometimes, but there, I feel like it's too much. He's not like this in the manga, he's not that protective, he's only caring about his brothers when they are in danger, but otherwise, they're doing what the hell they want, he'll even laugh at them in ridiculous situations, and I think he'd actually be budy with Law. So, at first, it was fun, but "LUFFY IS MINE" seriously, it looks a little bit too much now...
Also, it's really weird to see Chopper as an animal. I understand why, but to me he's a fully and entire human being inside, so it's really... hard now.
I really like the humor you've put into your fanfiction, otherwise, and I love Nami, I don't remember if I already told you that xD
And to finish, the end was gorgious. I have to say what's positive too, because I still like the fiction.

See you soon,
Plume-now