This is so so good! You are really talented ️

Not gonna lie, your writing is so great that I’ve honestly reread this story so many times!

Your writing style is absolutely gorgeous, and even though Red and Raven's relationship developed a little quickly, it's still incredibly intimate and beautiful. Your motifs with "pajarita" and "I could love you... I could learn" Amazing. Wonderful. A gift to us all. *chef's kiss*

I could go on for days about how great this writing is, and the moment I realized that Red and Raven's conversation about loyalty and justice was foreshadowing this Raven's denial right now, I was done. Like, I'm a little scared to read chapter 16 just because you haven't updated in a long time and at this point I could at least pretend there's still a bittersweet ending.

Like so many other reviews already demanded, I'd love to see you update soon. But I'm already infinitely grateful for what you've already given us here.

Hey! Can’t stop there!

Hellhounds... Why are they there anyway?

I'm filled with relief and glee that you seem alright. Though this is a tad late- thank you for another update. Jinx and Red have an amazing dynamic that I look forward to seeing you develop further. I wish I had such grace with dialog/body language/emotion intelligence when writing. Take care!
-M

I’m sooo glad you’re continuing this story!

I really loved this story!

So I found this random while browsing, binged the whole thing, and need more, a lot more, you've teased me the entire story never letting up, and now I want more. So plz update soon.

Dg

(Ps. goes without saying this is a fucking epic story. To me at least)

Damn, this is actually pretty good! I just binged the whole thing and I gotta say that you've got a good handle on these characterizations. Overall, Nice job!

Please, keep going!

Thanks for another chapter! Great to read 3

Please update soon. I love this story. Please make a happy ending. Make raven and red x get married and have children please

Good GOD your writing is incredible! Like, hot damn this is peak quality fanfic I’m blown away. This is one of my favorite ships and it rarely gets any attention so THANK YOU!

Can’t wait for the next chapter!

The quotes at the start of every chapter were so fitting. Chapter one's quote about Van Gogh was a really clever fit too. You really written this story well, shaping each character believably, especially X and Raven. I like how you work on their perspectives to have their own justification for their actions and beliefs. X's nature to mask his true self was spot on, like, he's trying so hard to not let anyone see who he truly is not just physically but in a deeper emotional level. He just wants everyone to aknowledge him as a 'thief', and not someone who is capable of being so much more than a criminal who steals.

And the best thing about your story is that Raven was that someone who got to know him, his true self. Like, the way I see it, Raven did 'see' him. Not physically, without his mask on, but she was able to 'see' him through his actions.

X may have been careful to mask everything but he was unaboe to mask his deeds, and it's really interesting that despite doing things thieves do, Raven got to see someone beyond that.

Your story is really good. I hope have the time to settle everything between them.
(ps. I also hope that X was able to give the payment for the suit's repair on time. I want him to be in top gear plss TT)
((pss. The bits and pieces you wrote for X's physical appearance was quite a surprise for me cuz I expected him to be pale or ginger or something. But it was a surprisingly GOOD surprise! And i found myself not disappointed at all! :D ))
(((But you still have to tell us what he REALLY looks like! You have to!)))
((((But if u don't want to... I guess it's ok :/ ))))