Nice, Midna would totally do this lmao. So spicy ~

Fuck it's been forever since I read this but it still has so much passion and I still love this pairing so much. Amazing job old friend.

Cool chapters

Hey,
I have just recently started reading stories in this fandom, and i have to say that this is one of the best stories i have read (not just in this fandom), so continue the work and please, give this story a happy ending.
I'll stop wasting your time, peace!

I'd work on formatting. Right off the bat its very noticeably weird with how you're doing dialogue. It also looks like you're using a different character for apostrophes than an apostrophe. There are spelling mistakes as well.

I'd also consider working on showing vs telling. Things seem stilted and the flow isn't quite there. Though part of that is the technical errors.

I suggest finding an editor to help with the technical side of things and working on polishing your prose.

Wonder if they ever made out on an off day?

Wolf Link returns.

When school is out you're gonna post more often right? I would really like it if you continued this story

These one shots are so cute, I hope you keep writing them

Have Midna and Link have sex!

good chapter. WRITE ANOTHER ONE! NOW! jk.

Chris: Hahahahahahaha fucking adorablllle! I love this story so god damned much. Can't wait for the next chapter! (If there's gonna be one)

Fuck yeah, a new chapter. I was waiting for this to update. Glad you are back. I can always help with ideas my friend you ever need them. I got your back.

Pocky game?

I really love how adorably cute this freaking story is. Anyways, I really hope that you and your friend are alright and that they're much better now! I honestly don't know what else to say thats positive for your friend but I just hope that they are happier now than they were.