I’m literally crying. I haven’t cried at a FanFiction in YEARS but this one did me in. Good god, it was so beautiful and heartfelt and absolutely lovely. Thank you for the beautiful story, and thank you for the character development, it was lovely.

I’ve never understood how people can write these things without crying...

I. Fucking. Want. To. Be. Lily.
Smart.
Pretty.
Screw that, gorgeous.
Talented.
Kind.
Dead.
Fucking amazing.

I think it’s cute... I’m looking for an appropriate fit to show my mom that it’s not all bad cough cough smut, and I think this could be it. Thanks babe!

Oh my gods. Okay so there are some stories that you read variations of, sweet takes of OTPs that you can read a 100 of them and love every single one. Then there are stories that you read and then decide not to read anything else, because that story is the only one that you can imagine in that place. This is one of those stories. The writing is magnificent and it’s clear how much time and effort you’ve put into this story. This was beautiful and amazing and a hundred other adjectives and I’m so thankful (also I’m crying). Thank you so much for expanding the universe in such a bittersweet was.

OMG...i am in tears...this is amazing

that made me absolutely sob, that was so well-written, well done!

Oh. My. Good. Heavens. Sobbing. I'm literally sobbing. This was a brilliant story. I love that you picked apart every single character and they became real. So good. Thank you for writing it! Now I'm just going to go finish sobbing, mmkay?

Hi.
I'm a fan of all things Jily, and came across this story while looking for another jily fic.
This story is awesome, and I totally love it.
Your characterisation of everyone, especially Peter and Lily is amazing.
Keep writing,
Love,
D.B.

This was so good. But there are some things there are wrong, Harry and Neville are birthed on the same date. Really really good story.

I've read this so so many times, and every single time, I cry. I'm crying right now. your words are beautiful, and I'm so glad I had the opportunity to see this. You are an amazing writer, and I aspire to move people with my words as well as you can...

The complete thing I enjoyed it.. It's so awesome. And perfect
It was just which I couldn't imagine completely..the complete story is awesome... Thnx for bringing this to us...

Thank you for writing that story. Seriously, this is one of the best FanFictions I've read! I laughed and cried...couldn't stop sobbing...tears everywhere!
I didn't want to read the last chapter because I knew what would happen but I had to know how you describe the end. I love how you bring the Marauders' relationship with Lily to the fore. And not only James, Sirius and Remus but also Peter! he is so often just a sidekick... It doesn't make the story any easier, but it makes everything much more realistic.

you are the best.i just love watch you are the perfect image of that era.

This is my most favourite “october 31, 1981” narration ever just no words it’s just great