*satisfied smile* A lovely ending to a well written, thoughtfully conceived story. Well done. :)

As always, a wonderfully written story.

*Sniffles* bitter but sweet and what Lance and Keith needed. And Lance kissing the Lady Brigid is so funny and in character with him. :)

Very good and I hope this helps Keith and Lance heal.

Poor Lance! All that waiting, all that pain...for nothing.

This is so sad! I wonder how - if - they are ever going to get Keith "back"?

Can't wait for the next part! This little attitude of Keith's looks deliciously interesting. Lots of potential for angst, love, and drama!

Keith is awake! Excellent. Wondering how this will go for him and Lance as well as the rest of the team!

A wonderful rare Keith/Lance romance, so angsty and emotional! I love how you portray Lance and his friendship with Allura. Some tough love she had to show her friend.

This intrigues me.

Normally I am not a Lance/Keith fan, but you take something people go through and really make it stand out and human. You show how the toll is taken on the caregiver, not always the one needed care.

Very interested to see where this story goes, and looking forward to more.

Very good :D You are taking this story in a great direction, Koibito :*