Reviews for Ridonculous Race Underdogs
TotalDramaHumiliation chapter 16 . 3/3
I'd love to see you continue this. The Rock/Jen relationship was really cute to read, and you've done well with the elimination order as well. Basically, please continue!
witchinmoonlight chapter 16 . 1/25
Hello, I just finished reading all these chapters, I gotta say, this has been a really good fanfic. Dare I say it might be even better than canon. Twists and turns, better decisions like how Devin and Carrie got together. I know you might be suffering from writer's block, but it would be nice to see you continue. Good luck and keep writing and rocking!
witchinmoonlight chapter 7 . 1/12
I will admit this is getting more interesting with each chapter. Kelly and Taylor returning could be a fanfic all on its own as well as the unused idea of the Vegans returning (I wonder if anyone has done either of those). The stepbrothers relationship improving was nicely done and it was interesting to see that Tom and Jen convinced Carrie to admit how she feels about Devin. Hopefully this means that they get together sooner. I'm surprised that the Cadets weren't eliminated because of Mom and Daughter's return, but I'm sure you've got something planned. Until the next review.
witchinmoonlight chapter 4 . 1/3
Pretty good work so far, I kinda thought that the scorpion affected Dwayne was funny, but even without it, it was still a good chapter. (Also missed the "I'm about to marry a dead person" line, but still good.) I like how we get a little more focus on the other guys, something that wasn't done much in canon. Now to read the other chapters... I'll still comment every once in a while.
witchinmoonlight chapter 1 . 12/22/2019
Hmm. I wouldn't think that fezz hats would add that much weight onto their heads, but still an interesting concept. Can't wait to see where this goes!
OhanaGirl2003 chapter 16 . 2/17/2019
I have to say, your story is so great. It's like your writing a script!
The Legendary Dragon Reaper chapter 5 . 12/9/2018
Well far be it for me to deny credit where credit is due, your story got me to start shipping Kitty x Mickey or whatever they call it.
Fangren chapter 16 . 10/9/2018
And so we come to the end of the line, it seems. At least Rock and Jen finally hooked up, so it isn't the worst episode to end on.

Not much to say about the chapter; I'm glad the Ice Dancers didn't get first although, obviously, they still need a more proper comeuppance. Other than that, yeah, everything was pretty much the same consistent level of good-ness, and I have no issue with how events unfolded. The only thing I'll note is that the reference to the Police Cadets in the first ice Dancers confessional reads a little oddly, since they've been out of the game for some time now. But that's just a minor thing, really.

Uh, other than that, whether you resume this project or not, I hope things go well for you. :)
Nicky Haugh chapter 16 . 10/6/2018
Nice one mate!
The Legendary Dragon Reaper chapter 16 . 10/5/2018
Please don’t tell me that means you’re giving up on this story, it’s absolutely phenomenal.
LaViolaViolaRosa chapter 16 . 10/5/2018
Aww, Rock and Jen. Never thought about how cute they would be together.
Samtastic 3.0 chapter 15 . 10/3/2018
Another good chapter. Better ending for Devin and Carrie :)
Fangren chapter 15 . 10/1/2018
Wow, it's really been a while hasn't it? I'm glad you decided to, at the very least, post the chapters you've already finished.

As for the chapter itself, I think you did a good job of it. Avoiding the Zip-It Ticket freshened things up a bit, and eliminating the Best Friends (though it was something I had predicted once it felt like their subplot was wrapping up) was, well, for the best. Of the five teams left only two were present in canon, so that should give you some more creative wiggle-room for the rest of the story.

I look forward to seeing what else you have. :)
Piecesxoxo chapter 15 . 9/29/2018
Oh my god it's back! I honestly LOVE how you handled Carrie and Devin although I didn't expect them to leave, still it was probably for the best they were eliminated here.
The Legendary Dragon Reaper chapter 15 . 9/29/2018
While I'm not exactly thrilled about the Best Friends being eliminated since they're my favorite team, I do get where you're coming from. Great chapter all the way though and I'm so glad you're updating this story again.
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