Even if it is a short Chapter, it is still better then none. Please keep on working on the next chapter!

Finally! You update this story! I thought you abandoned it! Glad that you're back, even if it's for a chapter.

Yes another chapter, and a great one too, loved it, keep up the great work Shiro!

Oh sweet mother of anime the total rush I just had.

Bahahaha! The Dark Side has cookies~. Sweet, rich, and irresistable. Oh how the cookie shall crumble...

We best be seeing more of the adorable fluffball amongst the Mages, plus I love how Luka seems close to Kari! Perhaps backstory? *wink wink*

YES FINALLY DEATH kinda how I don't die but like I said I don't care to much just give my Drade a challenge and I'm good. Anywho nice chapter and you to fighting soon I can't wait to see some of the OC's magic and how strong they are

Ah, Kari, mysterious as she is. How I wonder how things shall play out with her~

Loved the chapter, so well written, hope to see a chapter soon

The story looks really good! The events connect easy and characters are introduced smoothly. Excited to see my own character make an appearance!

Great work so far, the story is moving at a great pace.

Great story so far. Love the oc's!

Another interesting chapter but a bit short, i wanted more. The killing scene seemed a bit ... I guess later chapters will explain, so please update soon.

No worries about not right the chapter in the town. I'm sure eventually we'll get to see more of it.

A few interesting concepts got introduced. Now the guild is fully aware of Fairy Tail's return. That's interesting. Another would be the guild master whose name is very intriguing.

I look forward to the next update.

I think you're doing a good job of introducing the OCs into the story. From what I can see, these guys are already established members of the guild which makes things interesting. I thought Runa was hilarious in this chapter and look for to more of it. I can see the plot building up towards the grand magic games. Just a question on my end, since Fairy Tail disappeared six years ago, does that the OC's were at least six years younger when they met the members of fairy tail?

Anyway, really looking forward to the plot

So something entirely unrelated first. I skimmed through your profile and you've got interest in a lot of anime/manga that I also like. So that's cool. I will say that if you haven't watched/read all of HunterxHunter you should definitely do so, it's one of my favorites.

Moving on to business...

My apologies in advance for packing 3 reviews into 1 and if I come off as rough or anything, it's not on purpose. It's likely only my enthusiasm to see this story do well. However, please feel free to tell me if it's too much and I'll tone it down.

The opening chapters have done a good job of familiarizing us with the people of the guild. I like how every mage seems to be introduced with an epithet. It's a nice way to instantly give us a glimpse into the characters. However, I will say that it breaks the flow of the chapter. As each chapter is around 700 words. Compactness/flow/ideas/grammar are crucial to a good chapter.

That brings me to my next point. It's not wrong to write in the present tense, but as a personal pet peeve, I find that the grammatical structures of chapters written in that tense break the flow of a story to pieces. The scene direction should be written in past tense, while dialogue should be written in the present tense. Again that's my personal feeling on that. However, I know I'm not alone in that point.

I'm a huge fan of the class system you have going in this story. E-S class mages has always been something I myself wanted to implicate in a story however I was unsuccessful. You've done it here and it's quite intriguing. Something I'd like to point out is to be careful with your power scaling. You mentioned somewhere that S-class is leagues beyond Brain in his zero form. That makes everyone quite powerful which by virtue makes every villain quite powerful and I'm not sure how much room that leaves for mages to grow. You know best here though. So best of luck with that.

As for your ideas and plot. In the 2.5k words or so, you've introduced a ton of great ideas. From the class system to the Grand Magic Games happening to referencing the members of Fairy Tail albeit in a joking manner, you've really made this feel like it belongs in the world of Fairy Tail. To go along with that though, I'd like to see some of the next few chapters take place in the town. This way the town itself can feel better situated in Fiore.

I look forward to the next chapter and I'll likely be messaging about a few other things. Hopefully I haven't offended you.

Take Care.