Aww I almost cry, nice story congratulations

So, I'm gonna ask for a sequel cuz I think that one would be lovely to read! Also, I just enjoy how, even as a human, Sebastian is so damn... wickedly mischievous! And Ciel is so prideful and clumsy, it's absolutely adorable! I like, even though their roles were reversed to an extent, it really wasn't. So, please write a sequel cuz it'd be captivating and spectacular, undoubtedly!

Fuck. I know u have ur own opinions about how u want to write ur story. this is an AU and Ciel is so OOC, but i dont think making him look weak is good. He is stubborn, but he is also smart and cunning. So far in ur story, u made him look like an idiot and a brash kid. He is a demon over a century old, and yeah, i understand ur reasoning that demons age 'slower' but with that much years passed, atleast Ciel shouldn't be _that_(please read in italics) stupid. I mean, he has decencies of the demon that he should be respected an all, but he has to honor the contract that he holds with his master. I don't really like the idea how u potray Ciel in this story but i still like the story. Sorry for ranting, just my two cents. Probably in the later chapters i'll get more explaination on why Ciel is Ciel in this story. Thanks. (please don't be offended, i just like the strong Ciel better than this version of Ciel)

beautiful ending...I loved it!

such a nice & open ended ending! great job!

poor ciel had no clue how possessive he can be!

Lol, that foreign girl XD. I love how both she and Ciel were totally ignorant (in different ways), nit she was SURE that she knew everything. XD. I can't wait for the next chapter!… And WHO'S WOLF?!

i do like how you kept to some of the manga's bible-but puit a different twist on it!great cahpter & great job!

more please

AWESOME CHAPTER! That turned out MUCH differently than I would have expected… way to think outside of the box! This story is just so unpredictable! DON'T WORRY, that's a good thing ;) I can't wait till the next chapter!

if Sebastian knew ciel was not eaing souls-he would tell him to go find aome-but ciel is under a contract & can't

I love your writing please don't stop

your english is fine!but now we have grell here!if sebastian was bored before-he will not be now!

Awesome chapter! I recognized some of the side characters, but not all of them... oh well! I can beta test if you like, but I honestly don't think you need me. I couldn't tell you weren't a native speaker XD. Anyway, MERRY CHRISTMAS!

does she remind ciel of lizzie?