I wonder what Tora and Kabuto were planning...

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ino is such an annoying cunt in this, I'd of beat the bitch down had she showed up on my date acting like that.

aww

Well shit.

Ohmuhgawd! This chapter right here! WHAT!?

Sakura's ex husband his HIM?! (Hehhe, I'm not gonna say 'who' just in case there should be any 'review-before-story'ers out there) Um! Plot twist! I was NOT expecting that whatsoever! Oml! I mean, right after I read that, I had to stop for a few seconds and just ponder. WHAT!? Now things are REALLY going to heat up. I can already see it XD

In some quasi-news, the scene between Sakura and Sasuke was really sweet. I think I've told you this before, but SasuSaku is not my top favourite couple. Though I do love them and they hold a special place in my heart forever; you are now making them even more desirable! I am loving how much Sasuke shows to 'need' Sakura because she seems to be the only thing that makes sense in his messed up world. I love that even though he REALLY likes her, she is still subject to his outbursts and his coldness. But then he regrets it and everything gets all sweet like. Eeeeee! Love it! The placement and pace of the events of each chapter is so well written and planned. I believe everything is moving at just the right speed and what have you. Good job jah! :D

Now on to Naruto: I love him! Being the moron that I am, I missed QUITE a few episodes of the first and even the second arc of the entire Nruto series, so I'm not not too keen on his overall personality. But one thing that I do know, is that he can't hold his tongue XD He would nickname any and everybody 'bastard', 'little shit' or 'idiot'. And you've done that for him well XD He is faced with Itachi (a man who is accused of MURDER) and he is talking with Hinata about how stupid said man is XD I laughed my arse off at that! And speaking of Hinata, you putting her in here was a very smart move. She is the only thing keeping Naruto from inadvertently killing himself (in his attempt to kill Itachi, we all know it would most probably fail -from either being poorly thought out or just because- and Itachi WILL kill him if need be). I love how that she isn't sure of Itachi herself, but that she believes in Naruto and his judgment. That was so sweet and so Hinata :D Brilliant!

I love how you are still managing to make Naruto the hero. Even if the world doesn't know it yet ;)

Poor Itachi! All this pigeon-shit. No reward :(

Tora...I don't even know XD The psycho!

~Poodie

At first I thought that you accidentally put '119'. But I was wrong XD

Poor Naruto! Again! I can really understand his predicament XD Niw Hinata and himself are roped in. I wasn't expecting that at all! But I am enjoying the ride as it has started so far. I am really curious for as to what will commence from here on out.

YES! Finally! That moment we have all been waiting for! I'm glad it didn't feel rushed or like it took too long to get there!

Also, from the chase scene, this whole criminal thing is so much fun! It reminds me of my -crazy- AU 'Criminal Life' -ongoing. XD I had a blast reading that scene: my favourite!

~Poodie

I really enjoyed the last part of this chapter. It was so intense, and I actually feel really sorry for...Naruto. Yep. The blonde fool XD I know he's just trying to do the right thing, but unfortunately, Sasuke is hurting and with the whole 'Itachi killed my parents' indoctrinate, it would be hard. Sasuke would definitely be broken from what happened, and I would expect nothing less of his actions.

Poor Pop-Nart may have just lost his friendship over doing the 'right' thing by definition.

~Poodie

Sasuke can roll his eyes at Naruto all he wants. And Sakura can ignore Ino and get irritated. But I hope they remember who brought them together. Just saying.

Sakura NOW thinks she crossed the line? She crossed it a few times earlier! (But then again, with Sasuke, its kind of hard NOT to accidentaly cross the line. He's a little sensitive -understandably so though). I really enjoyed the dynamics of this chapter. And I appreciate its implementation to help the plot move along! :D Hurah for long chapters!

I am seriously curious about how this whole Naruto and Itachi thing will go. Mostly, I want to know if it'll work. Maybe Sasuke would go on a rage once he finds out and then accidentally kill Itachi? D: (Just spit-balling here) I REALLY hope it doesn't fuck up Naruto and Sasuke's friendship. But it'll do great for plot. Thats for sure!

Tehee! I wasn't expecting Sakura knowing kickboxing xD But its totally appropriate!

~Poodie

Gaddammit Ino! You gotta love her though XD The nosy bastard.

I have to say, all the fluff going on in here had me smiling like no tomorrow! Aaaaaand they got interrupted again! I actually wasn't expecting that XD Serves Sakura right for doubt that INO wouldn't tag along after giving her all the information. Know your best friend girl! NEVER TELL HER ANYTHING!

I enjoyed Sai's appearance (my top favourite character next to Kankuro) and I alos felt sorry for him XD. Leaves me to wonder: if he knew better, would he have gone with Ino? And by that I mean dated. XD

Awaiting le Evil Tora. I really want to see what kind of character she is exactly. So excited :3

~Poodie

Okay, I love this chapter! My favourite part was when Sasuke and Sakura were discussing their careers. I REALLY like the fact that Sasuke got Sakura to think twice on her job. When he said "You don't want them to be immortal with self healing abilities,". I was all like "Damn straight! Put THAT in your pipe and smoke it Sakura!". And then when Sakura asked him "Yes, but do you live a lie?"n that was SO DEEP! For real. I couldn't stop nodding my head and thought to myself, "Sakura is the wisest!"

I really appreciated the fact that you put in some little SaIno problems. I always loved multi-pairing stories!

More to be seen of Orochimaru and Gaara! I hope :3

~Poodie

I am just sitting here all like XD Orochimaru has me a bit confused at the moment...which is good!

I am a little bit more curious about the developing SasuSaku though...only a little XD

Kakashi is so amusing! I like how he knows so much!

~Poodie

My favourite part was the Naruto and Sasuke scene too! You portrayed them so well! I was like "yaaaaasssssss bitchhhhhhhh! Do it right!" :D I lovedlovedlovedlovedlovedLOVED their moment. It was so in character that its unbelievable! I liked how Naruto was actually the perpetrator of the thing XD I wasn't expecting that twist XD

Strangely enough, however, I did expect the who Sakura's uncle was twist (I'm not spoiling for any of the read-reviews-before-the-story type of people XD Just read it to find out!)

Quite fantastic! I loved Tsunade as well. And I'm wondering about Orochimaru and how he'll span out from now...

Yay for multi-pairings! (Once again, I loved Naruto XD He was sweet, stupid, determined and rowdy! Very IC)

I can't wait to proceed :3

~Poodie

As far as I'm concerned, the characters are very much in character. I think Sakura's initial reaction to Naruto was spot on, and that Sasuke would feel tense in a moment when his best friend popped up and startes stealing his girl's attention XD

I feel bad that Naruto was dumb enough to ruin everything. But hey! That's Naruto we all love :D It seems that blondes have a tendency to interrupt and introduce XD the I&I!

~Poodie

THANK YOU! Someone else who doesn't believe in character bashing! Bless your soul!

I really enjoyed this. I am curious to the character interactions that I'm sure will follow, and I'm glad you didn't make everyone as happy as a bunny (what with Shikamaru not being too fond of Sasuke and all XD). I was particulary happy with your portrayal of Karin (she amuses me XD) and that she wasnt the ex girlfriend that most other people would have used her as. Now I'm just curious as to WHO this ex actually is XD

On to the next!

~Poodie

Ohhhhh! Flashy ending jah! I like that you depicted a real state of depression, you know. I also adored the fact that even though Ino is her best friend, and that she loves her to death (maybe), Ino still jumps all over the party!

Not that I'm making any demands, but my favourite type of romance stories are multi-pairing. So I hope Ino settles down with a nice guy for once ;D I also hope she remains a consistent character throughout the story :3

I love where this is going!

~Poodie

P.s Thank iBloo for my reading, because I didn't even know this story was out there! A nice AU to read sounds good to me. And even though I'm no major SasuSaku fan, I love your writing style! Alas, here I am!