OMG this story is fucking awesomeness

hahaha you are a demon

Lol! Busted. Thanks for all the updates.

Loved it. Best line: ‘Go get me a switch’.

Love, love, love, how the race played out! Yay for Abby & Liv. Their training paid off. Though she was disqualified for cheating, I wish Mellie’s daddy would stop enabling & cut the apron strings. Jeez. Poor Harrison. I was rooting for him. And while I’m glad Edison’s parents know Liv left his sorry behind, they are delusion for thinking he can win her back. Nope. Not happening. I laughed when Olivia fixed Fitz a plate at the Davis family gathering and not Edison. I’m sad Fitz (and Jake) have to report for duty soon. Fitz’s final days with Liv will be bittersweet but I love that they are planning a future to see what path Abby took after the triathlon. In the present day, it we see Jake, Huck and Olitz in the military. Did Abby wait for Jake? Keep in touch with Olivia? Did she try & enlist? Excited for see the events leading up to Fitz being captured and Olivia’s rescue that opened the story. Almost there!

I am finally caught up. You must love a good bet in real life. You have some serious bets going in your stories. I would never bet you. I see where your mind could go. LOL...

Man, I don't have answers to your A/N questions except to say that no one writes revenge on Mellie like you do! And given that this Mellie is especially irksome, I know that I will enjoy that read. Lol
Liz North is a lacky who is out of her depth with this group and I won't be surprised that she truly gets desparate or fired by Pearson. The read-tag by Liv and Abby, punctuated by Fitz and Jake was too funny... they reduced Liz to a mumbling mess.
Edison... listen, this dude has 99 problems! A switch? HA!
Thanks for writing :))

I made a promise to do better and write reviews. I took a minute from writing and editing to try and catch up on the last couple of chapters. You know you always have my support and love. Besides you check in on me from time to time to make sure that I am personally okay.
Now to the story. Whenever I think that Mellie can't be anymore bat shit crazy then she proves me wrong, but I know that in the end she will be no match for Olivia so I look forward to that time even if it is hard to stomach Mellie...

Lmfao Olivia an Abby are the absolute worse. Im LOLing at what they did to Harrison. I don't feel any sympathy for his ass. This is too funny. Gerry et al met their match and they will do well than to go against Liv and Abby. I wish they would've shown the tape of Mellie's dishonesty.

Reader ...no matter the amount of times I have rerererererererererererererereread this story I am still fascinated by the perfect story telling and humor in every chapter..This chapter took it there..to another level and me laughing like a loon...YOU are going to bet me committed...LOL...LOL..OK as for the "triumvirate" and them accepting Liv and Abby's offer...HECK NO..those folks cannot seem to take their heads out of their asses and infuse a few $$ into their mix...they feel invincible...Feel sorry for Harrison...LOL ..NO cannot wait for the church visit in full drag and his poor neighbor seeing him sizing up the dress...LOL..size 12 pumps...That is just wrong..LOL...we already know you are going to give us a text book journey into comedy and we cannot wait...What should Fitz and Liv do in their final days...Secretly get married with NO one including Abby or Jake knowing but HUCK..YES please...But that idiot Edison and his parents thinking they can win Liv back from our guy Fitz...that is a joke in itself ...Reader...YOU know the begging for more comes next so PLEASE WE ARE BEGGING FOR MORE of this beast and yes the others...please...Talk about writing talent...

I loved the chapter and no I don't see them taking the offer they are to dum to they will thing luv and Abby are laying about the tapes great job once again

The chapters just keep getting better and better fantastic writing awesome work update asap

Great update. I need olitz to get married

I actually feel sorry for Harrison because he got caught up in Edison's bullsh*t and he has been on her side so maybe they should give him a break. I don't think Big Jerry and others will like the terms but I think they will agree for now. They can afford to be patient. They think they have nothing but time. What they don't realize is how strong the bond is between Fitz and Liv. Heck even Jake and Abby have a great bond. Edison's family is just as crazy as Big Jerry. They think Edison has a chance of winning Olivia back and even told him too. His mother and father are also under the impression that she will tire of Fitz. They didn't see the love these two share. It's ok because Olivia and Fitz have no problem showing the world.

I do feel sorry for Harrison, poor guy. Love how Olivia handled Edison and Liz especially. That last jab, regarding the surveillance tapes was priceless, haha. Thanks for the update, I re- read the last chapter to remind myself how awesome it was.
Now a request: please update What has it gotten me. Pretty please?