I need more.

shit dude, that was dark but a good read

What an awesome take on the story. A very true version of the snow queen. It was amazing!

I know this kind of comment must be annoying, especially since it doesn't have anything to do with this story, but I've got to ask that you start updating Fate Timoria again that story had so much promise AND IT'S ONLY TWO CHAPTERS LONG so I beg of you please update.

The last sentence really chilled me bravo!

Really good one-shoot.
Like any really good short story the only thing I don't like is that it finish to soon.
Thank you.

Would love a sequel

Very good

Interesting, nice work.

Truly powerful.

Some would wish this continue, but I understand all too well; in Worm, happy endings are not in the plan..

so sad

It's a great first chapter, I love it so far and can't wait to see where it goes!

wow!