Really loved your take and merger between Elfen Lied and Naruto.

Would love to see what Kushina has planned for Jiraiya and his no doubt failed attempt to remove her. Not to mention, really interested to see how the class and Iruka will react to Lucy and the others coming for Naruto.

Anyways, despite it being up for adoption, still going to follow and favorite.

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You plan on having Lucy bond with Naruto don'tcha.

PLEASE UPDATE!

Shivers went down my spine while Reading the end with O'Death was palying, That was sick and Twisted...and Awesome as Hell! Looking forward to more!

this could be very interesting

I'm really curious to what will happen when Lucy sees Naruto. Is Naruto going to be Lucy's destined master? Will Lucy and her sisters come upon seeing Naruto getting beaten upon the ground by Sasuke during their Taijutsu spare? Wonder what will happen if that happens.

Please update this story and others. You have left all of us hanging in so many of your stories. We all want to know what happens next.

I REALLY want to see more. I'm excited to see what happens next. CONTINUE!

In the last chapter, Kushina wants Lucy to look after Naruto. Why not order Lucy to bring him to her? I figure she would want to see her son.

SO BAD ASS CONTINUE MAYBE I WILL WRITE A STORY LIKE THIS

Oh, how I'm liking this story, it's giving my...oh, what's the word...Goosebumps! AHA HA HA HA HA HA!

I want to see the next chapter of this story and "The Hidden." What's taking so long? Why is it that when you make one new or remake story, you do one or two chapters and suddenly forget and neglect it for a new story?
You should do a list or schedule of which stories you should update.

I have read a couple of fanfictions like this before but most use the Ochimaru card. You on the other hand gave it a nice twist and maid it a Pure Blooded Uzumaki revenged story with the Diclonius thrown in for extra spice. You did wrote it in a interesting way

Is Kushina going to change Naruto's dna or is Naruto going to be a red head ?

Is Kushina going to act like a good mother in front of Naruto , less crazy but still crazy , or possessive with motherly love and over protective or a mixer of the three or maybe some completely different ?

Is Naruto like his mother mentally ?

How is Naruto going to react to Lucy , Kushina , what they going to tell him ,the affection of the Kushina , Lucy , The Diclonius ,and the new born Uzumaki and Diclonius ?

How is this going to affect Naruto later in the story and the events in cannon ?

I made sure to capitalized Naruto , Kushina , Diclonius , and Uzumaki

Please Don't kill me Kushina-sama and and if your are willing answer my questions Thank You

Love A person who does not want to died or be tortured 1234Fish1234Tail :)

i have to say chapter 2 was pretty good. like the twist I cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter and what will happen to jiraiya cant wait.

PLEASE do The Hidden next!

Interesting starting chapters. Keep up the good work. Update soon.