Despite the moments where it feels like you’re tying yourself a bit too tightly to Undertale’s sequence of events, this is a very fun read. I know it’s been a while, but I hope to see more soon! Soon-ish? Eventually...?
But seriously, good work!

Last updated in 2017... Darn.

Dang when I played kingdom Hearts and when the game undertale came out I didn't know what to expect and when KH3 came out I was so excited to play the game then a few days or weeks or so or less went by and it's 2019 and now I'm 17 and to see this not finished, but seeing how the author mix and matchs the story for sora and the gang to interact with the underground and the characters it brings me to this that I really WANT this story to be finished, it's just so amazing how everything is set up so neatly and the story so far is good I just hope the author finishs this fanfiction story because I'm really enjoying it I just hope that the author is doing ok and I hope they see this message

This fic has so much potential and I love it!

I just finished reading this, and this is very awesome so far! Looking forward to the next installment when possible

Very interesting. And if I'm right, Ephemera happens to be a reference to Ephemer from Kingdom Hears X Back Story/Union Cross?

While I am impressed with the story and cannot wait for the next installment to finally come out so you can continue, I thought the games made it clear that the Keyhole business was over and done with, also every, emphasis on every, world returned from the darkness when Kingdom Hearts that Xehanort's Heartless Ansem was sealed that includes Jiminy's world, if you do not bring that up again in future chapters and try to forget about it then great, the Keyhole factor can be overlooked if you figure in the fact that it was one of the worlds that were not taken or sealed. Also don't forget to add in Character appearances once we find out the end result of the third game like Maleficent, Pete, the new organization xiii, that will really spice things up and finally Flowey I am hoping for a full and permanent restoration to Asriel, if not then fine.

This is awesome! Well that would certainly give them a new view on Undine.

Ooooooooooo I always get so excited when I see you have a new update up! Are they going to see Papyrus in a nightmare too?

Goat-mom perma-killed some heartless. Without a keyblade. HOW. HOOOOWWWWW!

God this is so good AHHHH, I love Undyne, but Chara will always be #1, too bad she's showed as evil, but whatever it's your story

Nice chapter :)

Wow. Has it really been two years? Thanks for all the great memories Undertale.

Great story

I could hug you! When saw this notice pop up, you don't know how happy it made me. This chapter was really good. I hope to see more from you, but you don't have to rush! Thank you for continuing with this story.