Hey hurry and post I can't wait to see what happens!
WrittenWithLove

Please update! I've read this at least five times. I need to know what happens next. This is amazing and so original. So many stories depict Zuko as some hot shot and Katara as the feeble girl. I think this characterization matches the original characters much better. I need more. Love it!

Ouch! I could feel Zuko's pain. It must have hurt when he fell from cloud 9 and crashed into the friendzone. Can't wait for more.

God bless you.

I agree with InItToWinIt. The story is great, but I feel like Zuko is supposed to be really awkward and less preppy. Other than that the story is off to great start and I can't wait to see where you're taking it. Hope you update soon.

This was pretty entertaining!

That's harsh Katara, very harsh. Now I'm not sure if Zuko should end up with you, hmm...
Hope to get more insight on everyone, nothing bad to say on their characterization it's just how they (Katara,Sokka,Suki) came off in regarding Zuko, kinda presumptuous and rude in very very small terms. I actually really liked how you portrayed them as how great the flow was and not seeming forced, almost how they could be in modern day high school in certain terms.

I can almost image Katara and Sokka as the somewhat popular privileged kids, while Zuko (a cast-out from his main family) lives with his uncle in his apartment above his teashop.

In all, it's a really nice start, very clean and nicely written, and I'm looking forward to how this goes. Do gotta ask though, is how long to plan on making this?

Hopefully till next time!

Ah I forgot to add on my review! How many chapters are you planning to write? :) well can't wait for the next chapter!
I hope Katara will change her mind about Zuko :3

Omg ok I love this!
I love how you write Zuko as an awkward dorky guy!
Lol I also love how you write Katara as an extreme makeover. Awww Zuko has a crush on her? :D :( Poor Zuko..
Dammit Katara! Hopefully she'll like him before it's too late or something. . I hope you update soon! I can't wait for Zuko's makeover! This is exciting!

Ok, so I feel like you have a really interesting start and I'm interested to see where it goes. There are so many things to go wrong but I'm sure(hope) Zuko comes out as his beautiful self by the end of it.
I know you need Zuko to be dorky in this but he's dorky in the wrong sort of way. Like he wouldn't beam and be happy - he'd be more gruff, not good with words, and just super awkward. Instead of being all, "sure" and "I'll be there," and vigorous nodding, I feel like he would be more "uh, ok" and "I-I guess," sort of guy. His speech is part of his characterization as well as his actions, and it's hard to align Zuko with this guy. I really like what you have for a start, and I'm totally on board with Zuko being a bit of a dork just make sure he's the right sort of dork.
Good luck! Can't wait to see what's next!