| Reviews for The Third Rule |
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   BrokenMentality chapter 1 . 7/27 Bahahahahahahahahahahhaaha, Jake's face when he says "Title of OUR sex tape!" is hilarious and gets me every time XDDD |
| Miss Dreavus chapter 1 . 6/28 That was HAWT! *fans self* |
| itsafour chapter 1 . 7/18/2019 that was nice, so so good |
| jaquelinewright chapter 1 . 4/21/2019 awesome. the characters are perfect and the writing is on point |
| cachulfaian chapter 1 . 1/16/2019 Wow. This was hot as a desert in the middle of the day! Great job! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2018 Really good read! Super sexy ;) |
| sophie-the-duchess chapter 1 . 8/31/2018 Perfect follow up to the scene! Loved it! |
| TheRammbler chapter 1 . 8/25/2018 So good. Well done. Canon and in character. It was awesome. |
| NormalaW chapter 1 . 8/18/2018 Fantastic fan fic! I love this |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2018 It was so good. Literally in character and so well written! |
| Succulent chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 I can really see this happening after S3 E1. Thank you. Your story was SO GOOD and true to their characters. They're married now, maybe you can write more please? :) I can totally see Jake being submissive to Amy. Boooneee! |
| DancesWithSeatbelts chapter 1 . 1/10/2017 Fabulous. Sexy without being grossly graphic - but enough details and a great flow to the whole story. You nailed their characters. First time writing smut? Bravo. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 So well written! Well done! |
| Bella Duveen79 chapter 1 . 5/12/2016 That was brilliant - really enjoyed it! You have got their characters so well, and made it very hot and sexy at the same time. Great descriptions, and I so believe it could have happened just like this. The bit in the taxi was funny too - I could hear the driver saying that 'Don't let anyone tell you who you can love!' - great! |
| scapor chapter 1 . 4/21/2016 Very realistic and hot story - I think you captured their characters very well. Great job :) |
