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No, for your information, this chapter did NOT suck, whatsoever! I totally agree with you, in the Blast to the Past episode, they totally should've included more flashback moments! Anyways, I love your story so far, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!

I'm so sorry this is such a late review BUT this chapter was very good! I liked how both don't see the good things in their lives and that's the cause of the fight; they're both jealous of one another. That reflects a lot of friendship (I believe) so this is very realistic! I loved it! Happy new year!

OMG sorry I read this so late, I've been busy with college
I loved the chapter, I loved the way you wrote both girls being jealous of each other I find it very realistic :D
And thank you so so so much for mentioning me :) !

Hmm so both Maya and Riley are jealous of each other's lives, interesting

Your story is great! Very interesting and you have develope it really well. There are a few spelling mistakes, which makes the story a little harder to read, but, overall, the plot and the way you write is excellent. Looking forward to the next chapters, and to seasons 4 and 5, because they are the best seasons of BMW in my opinion. :)

Greaaat! :D

Ooooo can't wait to read the bay window talk! And laughed at the Maya thinking that Phil of the future and even Stevens are 90s shows lol! I loved this chapter!

I think it is adorable how Riley got to see her parents' first kiss

great chapter. One thing for sure Riley doesn't no about the episode, "bad hair day" where Topanga cuts her hair to prove a point, and screams. you also might want to go back and edit some stuff, yeah you got a lot of spelling errors in there.

AMAZING CHAPTER! Thanks for the shout-out!

Heeey!
Just read every chapter and this story is AWESOME :D
I haven't watched BMW but I've always wanted to and reading this story is like I'm watching it
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Overall, I'd say that the story is a good concept and trying to expand on something the writers covered can be a difficult to task. In my opinion, I feel that it would have made more sense to start the story perhaps during the actual episode itself (maybe between flashbacks), especially since you reused part of the flashback sequence they used as well. By the time Riley is in high school, I think she would understand that her parents are no longer her impossible thing.

A few things to watch out for. There were a few spelling errors, but sometimes those sneak by us no matter how much we may edit. Since you're using dialogue directly from the show, make sure that you use the *exact* wording. There were several times where you added words to their quotes, and that's "illegal" in the writing world. At the beginning of this chapter, I thought it was going to focus more on Topanga and it ended up following Cory more. I know season 1 doesn't follow much on Topanga, but try and keep in mind the continuity of the chapter. Also, I know Topanga's mother's name changes in the last couple of episodes she was in, but during this point in time her name was Chloe, so you should probably stick to seasonal canon. On a historical note, the hippie movement started in the 60s, and while it continued on for years after that it should probably be stated that Topanga was a hippie child from the 60s not the 70s.

Hahaha this is one of my favorite BMW episodes and it was nice see Maya's reactions! I loved this chapter and in future episodes I would like to see Maya and Riley see when Topanga cut her hair for Cory, umm I think the episode is called "Hair today goon tommorow" i think that would be interesting. Anyways can't wait until the next chapter :)

Teee Cory and Topanga's first kiss is coming up and I can't wait to read Riley and Maya's reaction