Reviews for Princess of Taken |
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XenoLucifer chapter 3 . 11/15/2019 Eh, you should fix it up, Orochimaru wouldn't act like that and you butting in by breaking the fourth wall might work in a comedy crack fic but it just ruins the immersion when you do it here. |
XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 11/15/2019 I've only read the first chapter and I like how you've set it up, though it looked a bit rushed. I hope this story turns out good. |
Endlessking999 chapter 1 . 7/23/2018 Ive only read the first chapter and its fucking dumb 1 how can something so advanced as the traveler become a tree you know what ill try and read it see if it makes sense. |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/16/2018 Your story makes no sense and I've only read 2 chapters you made kyuubi the traveler and Oryx which is impossible cause that wouldn't work at all. |
thermalsnipern7 chapter 25 . 1/26/2016 I can see the sequel now: "The Adventures of the Taken Queen." |
thermalsnipern7 chapter 23 . 1/15/2016 Oryx plus kindness and pacifism DO NOT MIX. And its only because I find it extremely weird and WAY out of character for him. [You know what to do if you want an explanation.] |
thermalsnipern7 chapter 22 . 1/13/2016 Chibi Oryx? ... Okay, that's actually the funniest thing I've heard thus far. |
shadowcatch chapter 22 . 1/12/2016 Piiiiieeeealula! piealula! piealula! |
thermalsnipern7 chapter 21 . 1/5/2016 ... I really need to get around to doing Kings Fall at some point. |
ultima-owner chapter 20 . 12/16/2015 that god's laugh spells bad news |
thermalsnipern7 chapter 20 . 12/15/2015 Can I get your XBOX 360 gamertag? (Please reply) |
RARE2000 chapter 19 . 12/10/2015 Yay! Character development! It's not a stomp anymore so I'm happy. Concerns met, opness nerfed. Character development is a go for takeoff command! |
RARE2000 chapter 17 . 12/7/2015 Oh yeah and I do have an account under the same name but I don't stay logged in all the time cuz I'm on mobile. If you wanna message me :D |
RARE2000 chapter 18 . 12/7/2015 Idea donation: i think he'll sing had a point. As they say the brightest light will cast the darkest shadow, you could have a manifesting insanity or an evil doppelgänger who tries to corrupt the taken. Idk, but I like donating ideas cuz I know that helps writers write. :D Again srry for the hate from before. Had a sh!t day. One thing led to another. Hope you keep writing! |
ultima-owner chapter 19 . 12/9/2015 Time to do regicide (killing royalty) |