Re: Chapter 1- McCoy is incredibly disrespectful and unprofessional, in the meal exchange. The fact the Kirk allows McCoy and Sulu to attack him in such a manner diminishes him as both the Captain and as an Adult! this Abrams Universe McCoy is incredibly unlikeable!

7. The Worst Witch City then tey wre on a quest Dawn was trained hang on Luna herelf found the Crew of the Enterprise onto brooms Jim! e was flying correctly poised but very straight then it happened young girls late for school Mildred Hubble held Tabby on her lap herself did learned from him a new way to fly then ws late but wearing a Watch this time was still studying her spells Jim here Mildred drink this tea Thanks then Easy Tabby she mixzxed it then was on the ground Bless me to Selenity our Goddess Where you learn to act meet him Greetings We are travelers what are you I am a Witch they are female magic users Midred use your mind and Vanish right then herself held Tabby then a strange alien thing vanished with her into a dormroom Sorry girls Ethel you look amazing try this Look hmmm Mildred Hubble you are on time where you use your skill and vanish Well held my cat vanished it's telekinesis drank my spell with tea really you seen calm Maud you have new glasses lost weight gone on a health spell kick MIdred wears her hair in twin things with bangs cut how stylish but fashionable Hecate noticed her still very busy still advancing her spells and learned to Vanish in thin air her powers just awakened Then meet your new teacher Dawn Read Spier Greeting Fourth year Witches you have grew into preteens Ethel Hallow present Hubble Grace Mildred Present as well look Studying for a big test but no thank you I need to ace this grade this time Enid
how she know her middle name it's true Nightshade present had a cut from this to this you ok Depends for Witches it's puberty I' Mildred Grace Hubble Is a Teenage Witch no longer a child just sealed a vow by witch blood nice bangs you look very teenage In case of a witch crisis we are Coven witch sisters for life but preparing for teenagehood got a boyfriend very striking but handsome this man alien but exotic herself blushed yes a crush well Miss Hardbroom she's sealed a vow by our blood only Hallow she is cycling it's Puberty well congraduations a Woman so do I We are growing up to be Women correct yes that was it Mildred felt weird becoming a Woman herelf young lady you are wearing these you ok I Have entered teenagehood first in case of a crisis a beck of a witch one don't wake my feline it needs rest.

Watch some of Final Fantasy XIV...they have a old world story vibe that might get you back into the swing of things...maybe...sort of...

Please, Sakura-sensei, update this! I am dying to know what happened next!
It's also the first ER fic ever that I really like. Usually I prefer not to read such kind of stories.
And good luck with your original! I hope, you'll perfectly cope both with it and your fanfiction.
On my part I continue devotedly working on Cardinal Rule translation so that more people could read your amazing story.

Wow! What an adventurous story. I love it! I just started reading two days ago and rushed to read when I had free time. So exciting. I still can't believe Spock and Jim had sex already.
Is the Old Spock (Selek I think) going to be in this fix? Just asking, no reason. One thing I am curious about, why didn't Spock adjust the way he conversed with others in the game or show little expression so that others wouldn't know a was Vulcan? They are going to figure it out with the vocabulary he is using. And I hope on everything Spirk that Jim has his Dragon on standby. He didn't need to let the other players know he had it anyways. It would have been nice if it was small enough to hide on Jim himself or it could appear as jewelry on his person to everyone else's eyes. Spock could make that happen and didn't have a chance to inform Kirk because he left earlier than the others. They need the element of surprise even with each other.
I do love the fic and am looking forward to reading future chapters. Please don't keep us waiting for too too long. Thank you for sharing your works so far.

This is a great chapter! I'm happy to see the new update.

A Dick, timid and a raging otaku...

Love the story but PLEASE let those dudes grow and be roommates irl when its done...hopefully they all cool it a little...

6. Sailor Moon Land
uh' Spock her tapped yes look down with all of th crew Good god man we are Anime what is that youma then Nyota Uhrua then Dawn Read Spier's voice Stop right there Stinkweed How Dare you to attack I Am the Champion of love and justice Now in the name of the moon kingdom We will right wrongs and triumphs over that means you! 4,11 inches long Golden yellow hair in balls both in thing feathers onto a seifuku long flowing gloves of white skirt of blue so her ribbon both collar of twin white was a teenage superheroine with powers then suddenly one plugged up player sneezed it's you Luna now Artemis we been hooked up Say Mars Fire IGNITE! with a little girl standing oh my god who are you Sailor Moon! Sailor Romulus! are Here! then you'r sushi rin Jin shi chi chou bai tou ZEN I CALL THE POWER OF MARS! FIREBALLS CHARGE! MARS FIRE
IGNITE! Blaring fire from Sailor Mars was a scout of passion and war guardian of the planet Mars I Call the Forces of nature storms and lightening to vanquish this EVIL O, GUARDIAN PLANET GRANT ME THE POWER! SUPREME THUNDER! CRASH! VENUS CRECSENT BEAM SMASH! You are are looking for a pretty blond Sailor V Stands for VICTORY! SAILOR VENUS! gasp hold on team MERCURY BUBBLES BLAST! Then her twin sister held her Wand then suddenly Herself was Vulcan was a sailor soldier so the rest of the team MOON HEALING ACTIVATION! PLUTO DEADLY SCREAM! Guarding the planet of time the soldier of revolution the guardian of the underworld ruler of Charon castle Sailor Pluto we Four Sailor Guardians are Here! CLEANSING! Momma mia URANUS WORLD SHAKING! Guided by the planet of wind guardian of heaven rules Miranda castle SAILOR URANUS! So goes for me the guardian of the seas the planet of oceans SAILOR NEPTUNE! From the depths of death ruin and rebirth planet of silence is my domain Saturn I The bringer of ruin brings death and destruction do not be afraid of me SAILOR SATURN! Stop! I Bring resurrection to all! the guardian of silence has Arrived! gasp oh my god we are powering up then suddenly Blinking to Supers level oh sugoi ho boy her self sweatdropped you meatball head Ooooooooooooooooooooh! huh oh man Honey we power down care to go to a Capsule motel yes Jim we need rooms for over here you girls then Pike whew whee sorry to bug you he looked the same loud clothes and sandals the young Vulcan female freaked this is Tokyo, Japan where our true mom grew up in this home yikes what is she I am in Crossroads High school a high school student oh Tigger you are hooked up here boy I Love Kittens then the Vulcans studied were her Acolytes of Mount Seleya of Gol were religious Vulcan women good god man Jo yes Dad you grew up what is she a teenager young lady Dad it was her father Egads James T Kirk um came we tell what world we are in Sailor Moon oh god I Need Sake Sulu yeslook Demora is sixteen yes guess we are here comes the grand finale EARTH CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! Suddenly stood as Super Sailor Earth here goes Nothing SOLARIS CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! there she stood with a weapon you two don't reveal yourselves hey you do you hear Martians crashed in Kyoto uh oh bad omen me too Claudia I Heard that Melvin her temper was a hormonal was so furious was fiery Dawn we are in high school you baka ulp watch it oh it's you yeah it's us we transformed we look like cartoon people Dawn he is a geek Jim we look like from Sailor Moon Commander what this look in the mirror Strom Momma mia I am a Cartoon Vulcan male yes your robes are now a Business
suit with you name a-hem T'Pran goodness Strom we look like dressed in Terran clothes Hi sis wicked you better in this house made for yourselves it happened morning ringing then a most much many more a very sharpest super loudest ear-ripping Serena Tsukino Scream then freaked out Past 8! I AM LATE! oh my god for school then a Slamming then Showering/oiling then can't Mom herself was vegetarian ate one toast grabbing her little girl Aunt we are on a mission huh we are ohayo Demora you look tired Yeah whipped homework oh how cute she is morning then Crossroads high right on time hello to this new student Greetings I am still a exchange student here is a secret we are Super Sailor scouts we are wearing Brooches gasp we are not humans but supernatural beings do you here a family of cold ones moved here who tell us pssssssssssssst the Cullens are Vampires urk then it happened Super Sailor Betazed and Super Sailor Bajor with Super Sailor Miri her name is Bree Tanner two new ones Jane and Alec are Volturi gasp are Super Super Sailor Risa are found two with aliens are selected to fight them then too late it was mixed with Twilight oh man who are these hunks they are handsome I Made food BURP! hold it Stacey had a problem : Men Herself told the girls oh no not them yes Commander yes you teach then Ohayo we are new Mother! sorry ulp Shimna us it's Vampire guys hi there Eeeeeeek! oh no Gracious oh my Sis Forks, Washington correct Poor baby down I Like him he's tired.

I said I would wait for this story and Here I Am! It's so good to have you back.

This is excellent and I'm happy to see this new chapter.

Welcome baaack~ . I love the development of this story.

YOU LIVE!

...and this is getting interesting...always interesting, but nothing wrong with more...

My lord, I couldn't put this storyline down once I started reading it. I rather hope it is eventually continued!
Though, I noticed a single mistake in one of the lines, though it gave me such a laugh. "Liver long and prosper"

Happy late birthday!

I wonder...will you be continuing this series?
I am very curious on how this will develop as it unravels more

update soon