Reviews for The Grand Chaos Gala |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cool chapter here nice job with the rainbooms reactions with discord and equesta and I like the girl reacton to the rainboom and twilight learning what discord did |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another exllcent capter cool job with the sleepover and introduction the cantonal high students |
![]() ![]() ![]() And so, life and friendship go on and on. Ah, nice ending. Not bad, it was a pretty good story. Aside from grammatical and redaction mistakes, I have few or nothing to complain about. Nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the song Dance Magic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() is there more? luckily both spikes didn't burp LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah Sunset Shimmer is gonna be a big sister |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() Are there any villains other than Discord and Sunset Shimmer who reformed going to appear in this for revenge or any other characters instead? I'm just asking, that's all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() is there more to this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool and interesting start here |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww...that SUPER SWEET! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HI PPS! [;)] Very good chapter here, and Princess Twilight is getting her 'stride' today (pardon whatever pun applies) with helping out her Human Counterpart. If there IS one thing I would have to pick out as a 'mistake', is the 'Pony Up' transformation. Don't get me wrong, it's very natural here, but the only thing out of place is the fact that Human Twilight already has wings in her transformation. Princess Twilight already went through several lessons of friendship before becoming an Alicorn; where as Human Twilight, who is barely starting, shouldn't be getting wings already. I don't want to be mean, and I'm trying to be tactful, but truthfully, Human Twilight 'Ponying Up' should not include Wings, if only because she represents Twilight in the time frame shortly after the Summer Sun Celebration. It took Pony Twilight nearly a year to 'earn her wings' (Why must this pun exist!?) so having Human Twilight do it in, what... a couple of months?... feels, I don't know, unintentionally insulting. I mean, we've seen a 'Ponied Up' Twilight without wings in the initial teaser for Rainbow Rocks as a design error, so she could exist from the Human Version becoming the Hybrid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...that's so sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...love those two. So next chapter is two Rainbow Dash, maybe meet Wondercolt or play human sports? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pinkie pies is indeed love cake. |