hello.I very love your fanfic hunter x hunter.
Can i to translate it ? please.

I from France so I'm French

I like that you gave the cliff notes finnish to this storey. I have come way late to a lot of fanfic parties and been this is AWSOME I need more! Oh they stopped writing a decade ago damn.

I enjoyed reading this, it was such a fun read. I just wanted to thank you for summarizing the ending. Like it sucks reading a fic and then wondering for the rest of the day “ how was it going to end” so thanks a lot for taking the time to write and share your story with us! Hope you have a great day!

Why did you stoop?

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Thanks for giving the summarization. I'm so glad you didn't cut it of on chapter 22. It was really interesting to see your thought process too. It really gave me some good insight when it came to writing myself. Thank you again

DAMN IT! Break my heart by writing a great fiction and abandoning it...

Sorry if I may ramble on for a bit, but the length of any of my reviews is directly proportionate to the strength of my feelings regarding the fanfic I read.

To start, I dont wish to guilt trip you for finishing (as you mentioned in your final notes), but I really do want to thank you for all the work youve done, no hard feelings for not finishing. Its been many many years I assume despite not finishing, youve soldiered on for far longer than most fanfiction authors writing long stories. But to be frank I am glad that I came here after youve finished and I could read everything in one piece. Im extremely glad you included your plans for the rest of the story, because it at least doesnt leave things unfinished and I can dream and picture those scenarios. Its a far better outcome than if youd just leave it be. I just want to tell you that I understand your sentiments when you discontinued the story and want to thank you for all the hard work youve put into it, because you mustve put so much work into it that berating you for not finishing would be just plain mean.

WH has kept me company for the last week. I found it during keyword search (was looking for fics wherein Kurapika basically gets fucked over) and it immediately piqued my interest for its sheer length. I was reading it together with my friend (the piece of shit who left the review below mine). There was SO MANY hysterical laughing fits. SO MANY loud squeals that had to be smothered by pillows. SO MANY other sounds that can only be produced by a fangirl. Reading it with a friend just amplified the experience so much. I would wake up in the middle of the night and start laughing because I remembered something from WH.

Speaking of which, I would like to address your two main actors. You said that some people told you they thought Kuroro was OOC. While this may be something that I probably kinda do agree with, for all intents and purposes, I didnt mind at all. I could feel the delicate effort that went into shaping who Kuroro is as a person, showing his inner thoughts, his motivations, his inner feelings, his human side, I just cant not give it to you. In canon, Kuroro and Kurapika are probably one of the most incompatible people so just writing KuroPika is a huge challenge by itself, and you really did put every single bit of effort into making it as realistic as possible, which is something Im very appreciative about. You didnt just take the easy way out by starting out with an established relationship or start with making it an obvious one-sided crush from the beginning. No, you took the hard way and you were magnificent at doing it, fuck what everyone says.

Personally, I had a complex attitude towards their relationship. At one side, I just wanted to see how you tackle the challenge of making two very incompatible characters fall in love, my inner yaoi fangirl just wanted to see it happen and my inner realist kept cringing so hard anytime a hint resurfaced. Wait, dont take me wrong. This cringe level of this fic was insane, but NOT IN A NEGATIVE WAY! It was exactly what made me love this fic so much – the you-know-theyre-going-to-end-up-together-but-dont-know-how-and-want-to-see-it-happen. When I say I was hysterically laughing and cringing, I really dont mean it badly, I just really enjoyed it that way. Its hard to explain. Neither I mean it was so bad it was hilarious or anything like that. But anytime Kuroro stepped up his game or something awkward happened between them, it was the kind of giddy cringe that makes you feel embarrassed but stupidly happy at the same time.

There were a few minor moments that really stood out to me. If I remember, one of them went something along the lines of:

“Leorios breath involuntarily hitched when he pictured Kurapika in a formal suit.”

This may be a stupid thing to pick on but I dont think I ever related to something so hard with all of my being, because me and Leorio obviously share the same sentiment. I spent several minutes laughing with tears coming out of my eyes. Same situation applied when Kurapika giggled during the time when Kuroro was unsealing his nen. Its that kind of scenario that I wouldnt think of at all, but when you wrote it, it sounded so real and so cute and so fluffy and so awkward I just couldnt even. Same when Kuror fell flat on his ass when he tried to ice skate. There were so many awesome plotpoints in your story, but these small silly ones really made it count and really made it stand out to me.

You know, the whole thing about two people who are so different on moral level yet have to be together at all times is so deep, but yet you managed to perfectly do it justice. Kurapikas thought processes felt very human to me and I could see it happen – because its really hard to be mad at someone who acts like, well, how Kuroro does in your version.

Moving on, Ill like to address your writing style, which (as you obviously already know) is the mother of all descriptive writing styles. I didnt not enjoy it. Sometimes it made things to stretch out for super long but you also had a lot of interesting observations, thoughts, back stories and world-building snippets to share, which made it all worthwhile. Furthermore, a plot this complex psychologically-wise deserves its share of thickly layered descriptions.

Another thing that stood out to me was your vocabulary. I regret not reading this with a translator at hand, but even without it, I learned plethora of new words and phrases, which speaks volumes about your ability as an author.

Now more as a personal thing, I want to thank you for being so harsh with Kurapika, constantly throwing trouble his way, injuring him etc. Its something like a kink of mine and the reason I found and stayed with this story. I appreciated all of that a lot.

Finally, again, I want to thank you with all my heart. You shouldnt feel bad for giving up, you shouldnt feel good for giving up what you thought was a bad story, but you should feel proud of what you accomplished throughout the years. You have my genuine thanks. Its really rare for me to come across an epic like this, so I always make sure to savor it. And if you werent satisfied with this, I want to see a story with which you are satisfied. You can be sure Ill come read your other published stories.

Youre probably super old by now, over 30 if my calculations are correct. I hope you accomplished your dream of becoming a professional novelist, and if not, Im at least glad I got to see your Magnum Opus fanfiction. :)

Im best friends with scarlet, the girl from the review below. I was there when the idea of adopting WH was created (honestly I was so surprised nobody did it so far, with all the support this story got, there was a high probabiliy of someone adopting it before we came along). I swear Ill be there to guide my friend through keeping up the cringe levels to the max and smack some sense into her every time she wants to use Chrollo instead of Kuroro and Phantom Troupe instead of Geneiryodan :)

In the end: Thanks. Thank you so, so much for making my sleepover week with my friend so memorable thanks to this fic. I know this review is a (bit) long winded, but I really wanted to relay all of my sentiments properly. Im sorry if I made this out to be less fawny than I intended (with all the cringing and laughing I kept mentioning), but it was not my intention to deliver something less than feelings of utmost appreciation.

Thank you so, so much. You have no idea how happy youve made me.

Cheers,

Mary Allen

Okay, to be honest I never expected anything from this fic as I've been challenged to read it by my friend but it turned out freaking amazing. More than I'd usually be willing to admit. I must say, it was a very pleasant surprise, though not so much when I found out it's been left to basically rot, but I suppose I can see your reasons. Anyway, you are quite a good author and though it's true Chrollo really wasn't much like in the anime/manga, you did a great job. (I'm usually really critical, especially in shipping fictions, so I'm not sure you'll understand just how much I liked reading this fic, so let's just say your writing style here was amazing.) I sure wish you luck in the future, should you write anything more.

Nononono you lie heart's can and have been broken, after getting so into this story only for it to be discontinued tears me apart. This is one of the best stories I have seen when it comes to kurapika and the spiders. Love yet hate how well it's described but only because I couldn't wait for the next part. I can only hope that you get your motivation back this story and finish it but for now bye.

Wild Hearts Can't Be Broken was the best fanfiction I've read so far in my life! Thank you so much for writing it. This is a very late review but I will be sure to read Pest Control next and I'm sure it will be as good as WH if not better. Keep up the good work!

I read the whole story in two days. That was great. I so understand it is difficult to keep the motivation until the end. Thank you for at least explain where you where going with that story.

Please write next chapter

Holy shit! the part about the bed...I face palmed myself so hard I have a bruise on my forehead