Ha ha ha!

I liked this! I would describe Natsu's day as being 'astonishingly marvelous', it seemed at most like it was just a good day. The same thing for the description of Lucy's day, it didn't seem that terrible. I still think you did a good job overall, though!

lol xD

Interesting, I like the story. Lucy went kinda Erza on Natsu haha xD

Are you new to fanfic? I know I am, your story is kinda inspiring an idea for me Cx