Another one of your wonderful stories. I'd read this before but enjoyed it just as much this time. I love your original characters. Your descriptions of everything is always excellent but this read I realized part of what I love about your writing is your description of thoughts and feelings. You do such a good job with putting us inside your characters. Made my day.

You did it again. I admit I'm generally not a fan of romance stories, I generally find it insipid. But your stories have a lot of character : the characters are strong, they have personalities, they have sense of humor, they used sarcasm (I'm a bit sarcastic myself), well, your characters are realistic.
This story :
First I think "oh No...not a love story !", but it's again so interesting, so full of unexpected development that it was difficult for me to stop reading it.
Congratulations (and I I saw there is a next part...and i'm going to read it).
Thank you.

Just the sort of romance I like the best.

I enjoyed this very much and thrilled that there is a second story. I don't even read any single chapter stories. The longer the better. Especially when Adam has a love interest. Everyone who writes a love story for Adam, almost always finds someone who appears to be the opposite personality for him and it takes a whole story just for them to get together. I hate when they are just finding each other and the story is done, I want a romance I can sink my teeth into...on to story 2. Thanks

Loved this story. It's refreshing to see Adam having to do the chasing for a change. So sweet the way he loved her unconditionally.

Beautiful. Will there b a sequel?

:) I'm glad she told the authorities everything. Though I'm confused as to why they'd even think of arresting her after she had. Sounds like they don't quite believe her.

I'm very happy Adam and she admit they love each other.

Nice story I have enjoyed it and am so glad that Eloise did come around. Hope you will continued it. Lots of potential for these two.

Yes, now that Adam and Eloise know where they stand with each other I believe they will make a strong couple, definitely a "force together". I hope there is another story coming that will get them back to the Ponderosa and we can see how they learn to grow with each other.

Some LTC to come yet I surmise. But they are well suited and life would never be dull with those two. Another lovely story. Thanks. Perhaps a sequel may be on the cards?

Finally, their true feelings are at the surface and they're sharing them with one another.

Thank you for making me an Eloise fan!

Not really a good Samaritan, but I'm glad someone in that area of town helped Eloise and Adam.

Adam must have considered that trouble would follow their arrival in Chicago. But even if Eloise had let Adam answer the door, I doubt Adam could have prevented their abduction.

Eloise is a quick thinker - she may have save them both!

So sweet! Just love this, it can't be the end. There must be more stories ahead for Adam and Eloise!

Awww... *warm fuzzies!* Thank you. :-)