One of the best Navia fanfiction I've read. The topic of dance itself was thrilling...

I really loved and enjoyed reading this story.. I'll gladly wait to read the next chapter.. Your work was truly amazing,, this story was really sweet and I felt contented after reading this much
From the fiery tango dance to lap dance... Overall it was fun... This kept me thrilled...
Thank you so much for writing something like this.

Woah chapter10 and 11 was super amazing
Really enjoyed it her dance, that song, boys sleepover...

Loved the dance(really really really loved it and her dress too. It was too beautiful), the compliments, the chemistry between them, Gray's shock and all..

Woah. What a dance? This is really great

Oh, poor Cana and Juvia! Even though it did take some time for both girls to realize how toxic Bacchus and Bora were to them, I'm glad that they did eventually realize that they deserve better. Even though we never really saw the full depth of Bora's and Juvia's relationship in the anime, I can only imagine that Bora is a manipulative person, seeing how he tried to trick Lucy and other women that he was the Salamander.

Anyways, aw, how cute! Honestly, is there ever a correct way to ask someone out? I mean, at least they didn't do it over text - that would be a whole 'nother story. I definitely can't wait for their first date together though! Hopefully it's not as painfully awkward as most dates are, haha.

And don't worry if you feel that your story is going too slowly! Remember : a good romance starts with a good friendship! A bad romance starts with "ra ra ah ah ah ro ma ro ma ma ga ga ooh la la"! Sometimes we forget about the side characters as we're too focused on the main pairing, so it's nice to see how the other couples are doing! Update soon~!

It's good to see the two finally confess! Slow burns are great though so don't worry about that! It makes the romance that much more sastifying in the end!

Is there anyway to ask someone out that isn't awkward as hell? I think you did a really good job on it myself!

You've done such a good job fleshing out the side characters in only, what like 3 chapters? They feel like real people instead of names the main duo sometimes interact with.

Also the scene with Cana and Juvia was super sweet and very emotional. Can't wait to see more!

Awww I loved it

What an amazing chapter, keep up the amazing work lassie.

Man I haven't had a guys night like this one in a long time. The interactions were pretty good, was pleasantly surprised at how non-douchey Laxus and Zeref were.

Gray's confession was interesting and unexpected. Natsu better get a move on before Gray decides to act on that.

You sound like you've been dealing with a lot. Addiction is an ugly thing. I hope all goes well for you and I hope to see more from this story soon!

I hope everything works out for the best for you! *floods you with virtual hugs*

Oh, poor Natsu! After everything's that happened with him, like with Lisanna's death and Zeref moving away and whatnot, it's a wonder that he's still the happy-go-lucky person he is today! Natsu reacted a lot better than I thought for someone who had to see a loved one that once left their life coming back again. Had it been me, I would have thrown a hissy fit.

Ugh, I totally feel for Natsu - I don't like sharing food unless I feel obligated to, LOL. And especially if someone like Juvia made you food? No way would I ever share it, especially if the person who wants to eat it too is Gray, her former crush!

And, LOL, the guys' night was so chaotic! It is interesting to see them openly - well, more or less, LOL - expressing their feelings about the women in their life. I have a feeling that Gajeel would bring Natsu to the side and give him the 'if you break Juvia's heart, I'll break your bones' talk very soon. I can't wait to see how this girls' night and guys' night affect their relationships! EEK!

Excellent chapter

It was funny !

Oh gosh, I hope you're feeling better! Food poisoning sucks; I once got food poisoning while making tacos from scratch with some of my fellow board members - I was a board member of a club in high school - and it was HORRIBLE. Woke up in the middle of the night to vomit and it was just *shudders*.

Anyways, the sleepover seems like it was so much fun! Haha, some of the girls are more evil in their dares/punishments than others. And ooh, Levy, what are you hiding, hmm? But the most important part: JUVIA! EEK! It's honestly scary how much confidence you gain from drinking alcohol. I'm pretty sure sober Juvia would NEVER send anything like that to Natsu but hey, she's gotta live in the moment. Worry about that in the morning, LOL. And the fact that he RESPONDED?! The next chapter's going to be AWKWARD. Update soon!

Well that was a lot more raunchy than I expected. You even made poor sweet little Juvia do a pole dancing routine.

I would tut but I think that only sounds right if you're British. XP

In all seriousness, this was a fun chapter to read and it flowed really really nice. You had several different characters speaking here and I never even once got confused who was who, so really good job on that!

It's good that Juvia is having girl time, instead of being an outcast. And now we have a very juicy reaction to look forward to!

No drunk stories from me, I'm not much of a drinker. But I habe seen and heard some crazy dumb things thanks to being the party dad/designated driver for everyone. I once had to wrestle a very very drunk girl back into my friend's house because she had gotten into her mind she needed to piss in the yard. In front of the elderly neighbors who hated my friend. I was the only sober person at that party so it fell on me to stop it.

It was like herding cats, but cats don't motherfuck you while you're herding them.