Reviews for Two Hearts Become One
RokuxNami3 chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
Ok I feel this should've been the plot to Kingdom Hearts III, Sora wanting to bring Roxas back only for his friends to die by the demon tide which causes Sora great sorrow and anger to the point he gives into a piece of Ventus that stayed within aka Vanitas who merged with Sora's heartless/darkness to nort him only for Roxas to fight Vanitas within, defeat him and fully merge with him and Sora's hearts into one heart, making Roxas make the ultimate sacrifice to save everyone. This'll be a good lesson Disney can teach, you won't always get what you want in life, but enjoy what you have for now because life will be good in the long run.
FusionCore chapter 14 . 2/10/2019
Ah this is great so much emotions... Its amazing how you managed to describe such tender and delicate feeling the two of them shared. Its Way more intimate then just some kind of sexual relationship, union of souls...
One question though how much consicious would Sora and Roxas retain in their permanently fused state? Will they forever sleep hugging eachother or is their minds fused and they are technically dead now? Can they have some kind of converation in their mind?
I really liked your style with writing this Do you plan to do more Fanfics like that? Somehow fusing Ventus Roxas Sora and Vanitas together? Though i admit Roxas and Sora are my favorite
Guest chapter 15 . 12/22/2018
ohhhh boy. riku and kairi arent going to be happy with the permanant fused state that sora and roxas are in now. tbh honest i expected more drama between sora and roxas wanting to stay as seperate beings anyways. they accepted the fusion pretty quickly
Ima Nonyme chapter 15 . 8/29/2018
Ven: Hey! Why I don't have a fusion with Roxas? Van has one with Sora!
Roxas: Rather die than merge with you!
Ven: You're mean!

Maku: Wow, you're monstrous...
Osiria: You looked at yourself, Mr. Four-Eyes-Four-Arms!
Maku: Me, at least, I can hide what is too much! Mr. Four-Eyes-Six-Arms!
Osiria: ... You are a rape!
Maku: I'm sure you too!
Osiria: Nobody loves you!
Maku: Yes! Aiko!
Aiko: Hey Spider-Jerk, if you touch Maku-Nii-San, I gonna break your coconut!
Maku: I'm so proud!

Osiria: I am the strongest!
Raven: You're also the one who cashes the least!
Osiria: No, I'm not!
Hikari: Yes, you are...
Osiria: NO!
Maku: You're weak...
Toxin: I agree with Maku...
Orion: And if we checked that, simply...
Osiria: How?!
Maku: You hit Raven and Raven hits you...
Osiria: You are aware that Raven is the one who strikes the weakest...
Maku: Exactly!
*Osiria violently hits Raven*
Raven: Nothing felt!
Osiria: WHAT THE HELL!?
Hikari: Pay attention to what you say! There are children here!
Raven and Toxin: No worries, we are used to it!
Raven! Now it's my turn!
*Raven sends a flick to Osiria*
Orion: Is he really spitting blood? It was a flick!
Maku: He is weak...
Toxin: Pathetic
Hikari: It's so much shame ... Fortunately I filmed everything!
Raven: Are you ok?
Osiria: I hate you so much!
Assanjin chapter 14 . 8/19/2018
The more I read this the more I fall in love with this story. The Relationship between Roxas and Sora jus feels...so genuine, so sincere that I cannot help but stand in awe of it. I genuinely thank you for your contributions to the world of fan fiction.
Team Wingless chapter 1 . 8/18/2018
But on the long side but good read I'll be back for more
Ima Nonyme chapter 14 . 8/18/2018
I'm crying!
If Sora, Roxas, Xion, Ven and Vani fuse together... is it gonna make something like a god? I think so! XD
Maku was not bad! He was just a troubled teenager! Because Vani was someone troubled!
... I miss Maku... But I like Hikari too!
readingchameleon chapter 14 . 8/18/2018
Awww, so sweet! I wonder what they decide in the end?
TheDeadGirlRisen chapter 13 . 7/2/2018
Two hearts that become darkness then turned back into... The next chapter name is probably going to be Light. XD I love this story and what you have done with this. I do hope to see Hiraki maybe having to fuse with Vanitas. It would be interesting to see cause I believe that it would end up in a more 50/50 fusion :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Revamped Persona chapter 13 . 6/22/2018
So... where the HELL is chapter 14?
Hohoho chapter 13 . 4/24/2018
Yes, feed me more~
Guest chapter 13 . 12/17/2017
you are making assumptions... i dont ship them.. and i think people shouldnt ship every close relationship they see, either. but on this site what did i expect? people here see everything with shipping goggles.
SorceressOfTheOceanAndStars chapter 8 . 11/23/2017
Mako basically said the very thing that I believe Sora secretly thinks, but doesn't like admitting to himself because he doesn't want to be selfish and hates seeing people suffer. I think he especially doesn't want to be the cause for that pain, so he hides behind a smile and tries to fool himself and everyone around him that he can handle it and everything will be okay.

Darn, now I'm wanting to put the story I'm working on up, but it isn't finished. *sighs* Mako seems to have a lot more common sense, despite the circumstance, he does make a pretty good Kingdom Hearts version of Opal, so I can see now why you mentioned it before.

Now, on to the next chapter!
SorceressOfTheOceanAndStars chapter 7 . 11/23/2017
Romance, Bromance, I don't care either way because THEY ARE JUST SO ADORABLE TOGETHER! Ah, my heart... (-v-)
SorceressOfTheOceanAndStars chapter 6 . 11/23/2017
Ohhhh! I thought that was Ventus asking Riku to help! Poor Roxas...
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