Reviews for After The War |
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creativesm75 chapter 4 . 12/30/2017 nice. |
willam and jack and jake chapter 4 . 2/19/2016 very well done |
willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 2/19/2016 nice lol |
willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 2/19/2016 poor dipper |
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 2/19/2016 nice |
SpoopyPotato9 chapter 4 . 12/1/2015 I quite enjoy this story so far! Just swallowed up all 4 chapters in last hour. I know the AMV on youtube(and I kri everytime T_T), you added a nice twist to it. Also if you plan on making this a BillDip thing, I wouldn't mind but it should be a super unhealthy relationship seeing the morbidity and depression of the whole story plot. If no BillDip I'm fine with that too, all in all interesting. Keep it up! |
Sandys3 chapter 3 . 11/29/2015 I cringed when I read this, just when you thought the story had potential it just had to turn into a cheesy BillDip story with an incredibly ooc human!Bill and Dipper. If you're going to make a BillDip story atleast try to make it seem realistic. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2015 Good job on Bill. As I'm reading it's almost as if his voice is in my job on his personality. |
bookworm289 chapter 2 . 11/23/2015 I LOVE this story_ |