Reviews for After The War |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor dipper |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite enjoy this story so far! Just swallowed up all 4 chapters in last hour. I know the AMV on youtube(and I kri everytime T_T), you added a nice twist to it. Also if you plan on making this a BillDip thing, I wouldn't mind but it should be a super unhealthy relationship seeing the morbidity and depression of the whole story plot. If no BillDip I'm fine with that too, all in all interesting. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cringed when I read this, just when you thought the story had potential it just had to turn into a cheesy BillDip story with an incredibly ooc human!Bill and Dipper. If you're going to make a BillDip story atleast try to make it seem realistic. |
![]() ![]() Good job on Bill. As I'm reading it's almost as if his voice is in my job on his personality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this story_ |