That was great. Can't wait to see how it progresses from there until Graduation.

Upgrade please, Is very beautiful

That "Jaeger fucked me two weeks ago" at the infirmary cracks me like shit. I can feel how satisfied Annie is to make both the nurse and Mina feeling embarassed cuz of that. That little monster.

I like this story so far. It will be great if you keep the description sharper and more focused on the main storyline.

I still feel this uncomfortably great distance between Annie and Eren. Especially cuz of Annie. Maybe because they don't meet too often. But I hope every chapters offer more progress of Annie's feeling and behavior towards Eren. Like a smooth (not sudden) and noticeable transition that will make the story move forward.
Thank you for the story and take care there!

I think one of the highlights of this chapter is how Bertholdt and Reiner interact with Eren, how they talk to him about Annie. I just find it so fascinating, and it still feels so in character for the three of them.
I also love the intimate moment between Eren and Annie, even if it didn't last long. And I think this chapter sums up their dynamic pretty well: "But you let me throw you to the ground..."
That ending! I was not expecting it, but I really liked it! I really can't wait to see where you take this story. It's such an amazing fic, it never disappoints. You never disappoint!
Of course, I can't forget to compliment your writing as well. The vocabulary you use, how you describe what every character is thinking. These phrases are the ones that stuck with me the most:
"[...] there is something about the consistency of training, however brutal, that comforts him in the absence of a mother and a father."
"Annie doesn't smile, which is probably funnier for her than anyone else."
"He's full of potential he doesn't even know he has, a daydream within her reach."
Thank you so much for updating, and for continuing this story. I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter!
Good luck!

continueation

Well the ending was certainly unexpected don't know how they'll get away with this if graduation is a few months. This is deffinatly one of the better Eren/Annie fic's out there (top 5 for me). I really like the way the story's going and the way you're developing Eren and Annie's characters and relationships with Annie's facade slowly cracking. Really hope it goes on for at least a good few more chapters maybe even taking it past their graduation to see if this would affect some of the later story. Your doing great work and I really hope it doesn't stop anytime soon.

Oh my god thank you SO MUCH for updating, I was literary having the worst day and you made it so much better. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Now I'll read, I'll leave another review when I finish!

I did not expect the chapter to go that way. Excited for whatever comes next.

This chapter is a great showcase of your evolution as a writer; it's heavy on insight into Annie's struggle between her organic humanity and the perverse version of it she has to perform in order to survive, which I felt was previously lacking and therefore holding you back. Eren is usually the star of the story, but in this case I feel like it's Annie. In the beginning, their relationship came across to me as a physical exploration of their chemistry. Now, I'm thinking twice if Annie really is doing this just because she can, or if she's more 'there' than I thought. Whatever you are going for, in my personal take, this is a metaphor for isolation and forced emotional undertaking by someone who does not believe she deserves to have a heart but is reminded of her mortality as she develops (or fails to!).

This is really wonderful and is by far, my favourite of anything I've read from you.

Yey! A new update!

So long, so good, so worth the wait!

Still love this so much!

I feel like this is the most somber chapter thus far, which is fitting for Annie's POV. I really liked the mental acrobatics throughout the narration! Relationships and feelings strictly 'logical,' so it was really exciting to read about her struggling with this new, foreign part of her life. What struck me most is that Annie clearly sees Eren as a boy, and not a man. It's terrible when someone you like is not right for you, and even worse when you're aware of that. But she's surprisingly not turning away! Wonder what will become of them?

I'm just confused about the purpose of the pregnancy plot point; the actual loss and Annie's behaviour leading up to it. I don't understand what you are going for there, but maybe it'll be clearer to me in later chapters!

I miss this story! Please update soon!
(this is the best Eren/Annie)

What an amazing chapter! You write Eren and Annie so well I honestly believe this could be canon. I really want to see where this story goes! I'm so excited!
Hope to read anything you write soon. Good luck!

Annie's pregante?

Yey! A new update!