this is four years after you posted but thanks for making me cry i guess? im sending u my therapy bills

Lovely but oh so sad

I'm crying so bad right now because this is one of the most saddest and most beautiful pieces of poetry I have ever read...the way you portrayed the characters...the way you ended their time with each other it was all so bittersweet...and heartbreakingly beautiful...I am in tears right now...I feel deeply for Naruto since I myself am a very lonely person and just thinking of Narutos loneliness has me overwhelmed with a sense of pain...the way he talked about dying slowly in his own 'beautiful' solitude of his mind and the way he spoke of Sasuke forgetting him he truly lived Sasuke and just like that Sasuke was gone in such a short time...the saddest part is Sasuke will probably forget him...for Naruto will always be forgotten...I feel like they are true loves but could never be together and it wounds my heart that they had such a short time to be together and are now separated forever...thank you for writing this beautiful masterpiece...

(I dedicate the song 'I Found' by 'Amber Run' to this beautiful one-shot)

you my friend are cruel

So good that cried at the end.

This fucked me up so bad rip

How dare you right such a beautiful story how dare you im crying I love this so much

How could you? Oh my heart. This is so beautiful, yet do sad. You did a great job!

Your evil! I feel incomplete.

That was such a nice sad story. I even cried. I look forward to your next work

my kokoro went boom... T~T

this story is so beautiful. instead of a sequel, i think a prequel would be better, no?

lol.. who needed a heart anyways?beautifully written

what...no...What...I can't...Goddamnit! I really enjoyed it...But the onions. You gotta stop cutting them.

This story was incredibly beautiful, and I loved it, despite the empty feeling I was left with. Can you please, pleeease make an after story, though? This story deserves one ;-;