Ahahaha "What do you expect me to do? Do warrior pose on him?" PRICELESS!

This is the best story I've read by up until now, not exaggerating. It made me laugh(you have an awesome sense of humor!), cry(he didn't deserve it), heartbeat speed up(a job well done on the battle and escape scenes)embarrassment ( erm you know why), overall it's AMAZING!

I don't get it. Why the elaborate plot? Wormtail had both Snape an Potter in his control. Wouldn't it be easier to just kill them? Perhaps just take Harry to the forest an apperate away with him? Why blab his plans to Snape? Your plot isn't very well thought out.

Not a bad what if story and I even got a chuckle here and there too !

The Crimson Mage.

It cant be over.

Man some times I really Hate Fudge.

very good wish peter could enjoy a kiss instead

i thought harry would captured by greyback or another death eater..
(actually i'm counting what if harry get caught by voldy.. what would voldy do to harry, what kind of torturing harry could be taken.. what reaction and action voldy make if he knows harry is hocrux.. so many what if)

i also hope harry got some munggle friend and thanks god u made it happened..

i'm always waiting framed story.. just remember there are a lot of people check their email everyday to know maybe u update ur story.. :D

see u again hithatsme-chan :)

WHAT!?

What did Dumbledore do!?

OMG, PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I HAVE TO KNOW.

Arrested and free soon i suspect

OH no looks like the S**T has now hit the fan poor Voldy...

Great story, can't wait to see how it all ends.

shit, i should have been studing, but your story was so good,shit, i think that i like how you made harry like a real tenage... yeah i like that... and i love dracos help... and all of that, well i am going to go.

Hey there, just read what you've gotten so far. I like the idea a lot, them being framed. You do well with the action scenes! Though I admit, Harry and Severus are very out of character. Severus is as caustic and witty as ever, which I know must be hard to write. But I feel that he opens up too quickly. Harry sometimes seems more childish than he normally is. The humor is good in most situations, but I gotta admit that the part a few chapters ago where Harry called Severus fat was a bit too out of character for me. Still, you have a lot of creativity in the humor that you use, and I especially like the bit about Voldemort being swamped by a wave. I hate when that happens, and it's just so ordinary of a way to incapacitate a guy like Voldemort. I love the irony in that!

i like harry characters like some real teens(eventhough it was ooc but i love it)
*me still waiting harry being kidnaped or captured and tortured by death eater and voldy*sado-maso mode on #evillaugh
Ehm.. ehm..
Well.. keep fighting 123hithatsme-san, remember i still watch n love ur story.. :)